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Chapter 1 - Daddy

a poem to muh daddy...

Chapter 1 - Daddy

Chapter 1 - Daddy
even though your not around,
i can still feel you,
when i am here on the ground,
with blood at my shoe.

i did it to be with youm
couldnt stop once i started,
just couldnt deal with the fact,
that we have parted.

you made me do it,
its all your fault,
you werent there to stop me,
now im here and your not.

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StoryMaker on March 20, 2006, 4:18:58 AM

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StoryMakeri feel your pain.

ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:47:24 AM

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ILoveAangman that was so good write more write more i am so adding this one to my favorites!

Fushigi_4_You on July 13, 2004, 4:28:28 AM

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Fushigi_4_YouXD I can soo relate to this poem... very cool. Write some more!

DONTlookATme13 on May 15, 2004, 9:23:46 AM

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DONTlookATme13this is so kool, i luv it i luv it i luv it

~~**~~hELLY IN wONDERHELL~~**~~

BloodySunAngel on April 24, 2004, 4:46:16 AM

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BloodySunAngelWhoa. You... you... BRUTALLY MURDER HIM! WOOT! Opinion 2 worked! Lol. This is awesome. I've been adding all of them to my favorites! ON TO THE NEXT ONE! ^^