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Chapter 1 - 1

Iceshadow's loved one, Foxfur's, point of veiw as he morns his mate.

Chapter 1 - 1

Chapter 1 - 1
His sorruful wails fill the vally, his morning is so great
He remembers when she died, and inside his heart aces.

Just laying the, black, white, and red, as lifeless as her eyes
He knows he must, but he doesn''t want to say "Good-bye".

He wants to run, run far away, he also wants to die
He feels as though a Twolegs tear has fllen down his eye.

"It''s ShadowClan''s fault!" he wants to scream, "And after what we''ve done?
"RiverClan''s helped ShadowClan, while Scorge was on the run."

He knows of the heartless Clan, he knows they''ll sink so low
But he will never forget the day when the killed Iceshadow.






Fin.

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peeweethebudgie on October 20, 2006, 1:42:36 AM

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peeweethebudgiewaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

LunarMooneye14 on June 20, 2006, 1:05:19 AM

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LunarMooneye14So sad!

vanilla_cream_girl on June 17, 2006, 11:49:03 AM

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vanilla_cream_girlThis is a good poem! But very sad... *Sobs* Nice job!

Midniterocks on June 11, 2006, 5:20:15 AM

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Midniterocksthat's a really moving poem

purpleponygirl on June 5, 2006, 11:38:08 AM

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purpleponygirlAwwww!*sniff*That's a really nice poem story!I fav it.*sniff*Poor little Iceshadow.*sniff*