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Chapter 1 - the start

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Chapter 1 - the start

Chapter 1 - the start
the evening was sitting in, people of a near by village were settling in for a good night sleep. a young girl in a chinese dress was sitting on the ground. her powder blue eyes watch with sadness looking at the families. she had no one by her side she wass all alone. most shooed her away others tried to catch her. verry few gave her food and tea. tears stung her eyes as she watched wishing apon the first of hevans eyes to appear at night to safly giued her through her journey away from hunters. on her back were two bith marks in the shape of wings one dark the other light. her family was gone. her small body was running on empty as she stood up and continued to walk on ward.she needed shelter for the night. she needed to move quicky as posible. she ran at the crak of a twig. her heart pounding with fear. she ran to a bush and everything went black.

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Doomlord1234 on January 31, 2010, 8:16:17 AM

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Doomlord1234What's gonna happen!

TearsOfLove96 on August 4, 2009, 7:23:21 AM

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TearsOfLove96sound good !!
I like it
very intense

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