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Chapter 1 - Restless night

its Kh based with twists and turns ^^ please comment on it

Chapter 1 - Restless night

Chapter 1 - Restless night
awoke to the sound of glass breaking on the floor [what was that sound.] I said to myself as I got out of bed to find out where that noise came from. As Maria walked down the hall way her long blonde hair tickled her cheek as she walked down the hall to her brother’s room. When she opened the door she saw her brother Aaron with a baseball bat and him swinging it with his head phones on and turned up all the way.[“Aaron what are you doing.] She said taking the bat away and removing his headphones to. [Hey sis sorry I was practicing for tomorrow did I wake you.] He said looking at her seeing her giving him the evil look that every one knows she give when she is mad. [I... I’m sorry Maria I’ll go back to bed ok.] [You better and if you wake me again I’ll tell mom k.] she said as she turned away to go back to bed and shut her door. Sleep finally came and so did her painful dreams. [No you liar you never cared for me.] She said [of course I cared for you Maria or I would not brought you here to Kohana village.] Daigo said taking a step towards her as he pressed her against the wall and lifted his hand to lift her cheek to kiss her on her neck to. [Get AWAY.”]She yells and fights him off only to be pinned harder and started to her clothes and all she did was begin to cry. The next time she woke up it was because Aaron was shaking her arm really hard and yelling [Maria it’s just a dream wake up.] [What do you think your doing Aaron?] She said hitting her brother’s hand off his shoulder.

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sakura3001 on May 15, 2007, 5:53:46 AM

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sakura3001wow!!!good job

soraXriku on April 16, 2007, 5:06:28 AM

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soraXrikuoOooOooOOooOOOoOOOOo
love it~!!!
faves!
*glomps*

flying_Jone on April 13, 2007, 4:02:45 AM

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flying_Jonehis is cool!! :D i have to read more o.O
*favs

friend on April 13, 2007, 1:13:54 AM

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friendgood story:)^^

moog1895 on April 12, 2007, 1:59:47 AM

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moog1895Awww!!!I want your brother!

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 11, 2007, 10:25:39 AM

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sasukeXsakuraforever*squee* write more... WrItE mOrE... WRITE MORE! So dramatic! ^_^ I LOVE IT!

shiny_angel on April 11, 2007, 8:18:21 AM

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shiny_angelWow... this was really exciting!! you have to write more!!
i'll add it to my favorites so i can read the rest! ^^

PunkWolfGirl on April 11, 2007, 7:39:24 AM

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PunkWolfGirlKOOL! Cant Wiat For Teh Next Chapter ^-^

PurplePhoenix on April 11, 2007, 4:46:18 AM

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PurplePhoenixOoh Exciting! ^^
Can't wait for the next chappy b^-^d

TifaStrifes on April 11, 2007, 1:35:27 AM

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TifaStrifesOo Sounds Good!!!! Cant Wait For Teh Next Chapter -^^-