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Chapter 1 - My China Doll (poetry)

i won a poetry contest with this.... i do not know why, i really don't think it's that good

Chapter 1 - My China Doll (poetry)

Chapter 1 - My China Doll (poetry)
My China doll, fleshy skin, rosy cheeks. My China doll, suede black hair, deep brown eyes. My China
 
doll, tip and topple and a crash proceeds. She’s broken. A crack is in her chest. My China doll now
 
 seems useless. Tears a cascading, slamming of doors. I stand in horror. What have I caused? Cold
 
and passing, left untouched. She’s held high. Placed piece by piece, made by hand. Illustrious in
 
smile and a flashing of my eyes. My China doll held in my arms. There sitting on the wood of the
 
dresser, the China doll stands. Her smile denounces the air. Her looks have veered. My China doll,
 
dull cheeks and pale in skin. My China doll, polished glass, flat black eyes. Questions fill my mind.
 
Why has she changed?

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pirichanshi on June 8, 2006, 1:45:40 AM

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pirichanshiwow! i really admire ur work!