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Chapter 2 - chapter 2

The whole Sonic gang is at Sonic's house on Christmas eve but not much is joyous

Chapter 2 - chapter 2

Chapter 2 - chapter 2


Everyone stared at Sonic because he was the 'Great Destroyer.' Then Amy broke the silence by saying, "I'm so proud of my Sonic!" and she ran toward him. Sonic took out a laser pistol, pointed it at Amy and said, "Back up!" "LASER TAG! YAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!" Tails screamed (nobody was guarding the coffee or the sugar today). Tails took out a laser machine gun, and went on a laser shooting spree, even though he knew the lasers were real. The pink aliens said, "This is truly the great destroyers house! Make yourself at home!!!" A lot more pink aliens jumped out of their jumpsuits (why did you think they were called JUMPsuits). They took out lawn chairs, umbrellas, and fruit drinks with the little umbrellas in them. They also took out a big laser with Sonic, Tails, Amy, Rouge, Cream, and Knuckle's DNA locked so they couldn't escape and had to tend to their every whim. They then took out an artificial sun so they could get a tan. Then a Goth fox walked in, said, "Dude, the sun. Not cool." And walked out. Then all the pink aliens said both in awe and perfect unison, "The great overlord has arrived" and started bowing down. A laser shot through the wall cutting out an echidna. Then, (even though you probably already guessed) Tikal came in on a floating throne.

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Mattkur on February 28, 2006, 8:24:15 AM

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MattkurWill i EVER stop asking THESE STUPID QUESTIONS that will be REVEALED in a long TIME!?

Ultimate_Lifeform on December 12, 2006, 6:26:26 AM

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Ultimate_LifeformTikal came in on a floating throne because it's more dramatic; I haven't decided what is wrong with the pink people, and I will write more by Christmas. there. now your life is complete.

Mattkur on February 28, 2006, 8:22:23 AM

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MattkurTOO MANY QUESTIONS! WHY did TIKAL come in on a FLOATING THRONE??? WHAT is WRONG with the pink people in JUMPSUITS!? And most importantly, will YOU EVER write MORE!!?? TOO MANY QUESTIONS!!!!!!

Ultimate_Lifeform on January 13, 2006, 11:27:16 AM

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Ultimate_Lifeformoh, sure!

darkness42 on January 13, 2006, 7:25:37 AM

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darkness42i don't know just tell people to go there in your story.......like this story is sponsered by darkness42's comics or somethin or you don't haveta if you don't wanna you decide. again thanks for the name i put a new chapter in!

Ultimate_Lifeform on January 8, 2006, 9:41:57 AM

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Ultimate_LifeformSure! Espio will be in chapter 3 but what do you mean tell people about your comic? P.S. they are very good comics

darkness42 on January 7, 2006, 5:27:02 AM

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darkness42 can you put espio some where in there or tell people about my comic? ppppplllllllleeeaaaaasssssseeeeee.
*favs*

Ultimate_Lifeform on January 4, 2006, 10:18:03 PM

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Ultimate_Lifeformi realize it is very short but if i had written anymore i wouldn't have a cliffhanger