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Chapter 1 - How i Got here

its about a young girl bout 12
shes an explorer and shes in the sahahra desert when she comes across a creature.

Chapter 1 - How i Got here

Chapter 1 - How i Got here
Ok, well, Im not finished with this yet but it will be a small preview of what Im really writing.
So there I was. Staring at the creature before me. Its black beady eyes scanned me. My sky blue eyes scanned its scaly green skin. Everytime it breathed out smoke would rise up into the air. I stood still and breathed as lightly as anyone could ever breathe. Its retractable claws shimmered in the setting sun. His shiny, slimy scales burned my eyes. After awhile he took a step forward. I didnt dare to move because I knew that if I did that he would pounce on me, probably make me his slave, kill me, or just torture me. Who knows what he would do??? Nighttime was falling and everything was being drunken up by the darkness. I didnt show fear; I couldnt, for I knew that if I did he would sense it. My legs started aching, I longed to sit down. When morning came I had vowed to myself that I would never stand over an hour ever again. The creature got tired of just standing there and turned to leave. I forgot that that certain creatures were actually smart so I turned to go also. He hears my Nikes crunching the gravel turned and started to chase me. Good thing that Im on the track team. But no, that didnt help at all. He soon caught up and pounced. Sharp claws were ripping through my shirt and cut through my skin. I screamed bloody murder. Nothing worked. I could feel blood all over my back. The pain was excruciating. I couldnt breathe. Everything went dark.

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zetalover on September 30, 2006, 6:44:31 AM

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zetaloverO_______o cool.

Ranson on September 30, 2006, 5:17:59 AM

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RansonFreaky...I can't wait for another chapter! Good story!

MonkeyDLuffy on September 30, 2006, 3:30:09 AM

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MonkeyDLuffyIT SOUNDS LIKE AVP!
luffy-u sed that already!
me-SO?!

XSpiritedAwayX on September 30, 2006, 4:03:56 AM

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XSpiritedAwayXthanks... i deleted the other one cuz not msny people were seeing it.