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Chapter 1 - Alone again

an original story by mwah about a boy named victor and a weird visit to his grand parents.

Chapter 1 - Alone again

Chapter 1 - Alone again
Chapter 1:
Alone Again

by Valen "James" Graves

        It was an oddly cold winters day Near Williamsport when the occurrences happened that will change a boys life forever. Are story however, begins a week later with a young boy about 16 who is visiting his grandparents. This had been a normal thing for young Victor, ever since his parents decided they could travel the world one and a half years ago. Every other month, Victor would be taken from school for two weeks so his parents could travel. This is something he liked the most, two weeks from school with nothing but mountain air and his grandfathers stories to look forward to.

        As young Victor exited the taxi that had driven him to his grandparents. A boy stood there 5 feet tall with moderately long bluish blond hair and semi-tan skin. A scar on the right part of his chin from a baseball last season. He wore a black shirt that had chain-looking pictures on it and tight jeans. He wore black skull shoes and a belt with fire written in red and yellow on the buckle. His reddish-purple eyes stood out on him a lot. He walked up the 3 stories of stairs to his grandparents house. They were a Japanese style family even though they were American. His grandfather was even Italian and his grandmother was Philipino. Their house was also Japanese style. They had a dojo outside where his grand parents taught him martial arts and a shrine said to be dedicated to the dimensional goddess.

        “Hi sohubo,” he said to them as he walked through the door. Sohubo means grandparents in Japanese. “How have you been?”
        They had a very peculiar expression on there face. It wasn’t cause they weren’t expecting him to bring a guest. “Who is your lady fiend Victor?” said his grandparents.
        
        Victor had no idea that anyone was behind him at all. He know he left the taxi by himself, so who could this girl be. Victor turned to see a green haired girl standing behind him. She appeared to be a little younger than him. She was wearing short primitive clothing and had rosy red cheeks that extenuated the color of her green eyes. She must have been nervous because a bead of sweat was trickling down her neck. She had no shoes on but her feet looked as if she had walked on air getting there despite the dirt and mud on the steps up.

        Startled Victor finally spoke,” Who the hell are you!?!?” He had no idea he had screamed loudly. The girl had been startled and ran away into the thick forest without a single word . He had turned around to see his grandparents smiling and whispering something. If he knew his grandparents like he thought he did they were thinking of how cute his new girlfriend was despite of him not even knowing who or where the mysterious woman had come from. Once again he had been alone by himself ready for two weeks of relaxation .

        But he couldn’t help but wonder where he had seen the girl before. Had she followed him from school. Or maybe she was from his school. She could also have been a neighbor of his grandparents. All he knew is he remembered seeing her before. Oh well, he thought as he walked through the house. It was late and he figured he would go to bed. He hoped something would help him remember the next day but for now it was time to sleep.

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HikariYugiYamiAtemu on January 20, 2008, 2:19:12 PM

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HikariYugiYamiAtemuinteresting story..:)

who's the girl ? I guess I'll find out soon..:)

blackbird1331 on January 14, 2008, 11:01:35 AM

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blackbird1331I wonder who she is?