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Chapter 1 - PART ONE

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Chapter 1 - PART ONE

Chapter 1 - PART ONE
ZOIDS FURY UNLEASHED


(This takes place between the end of Guardian Force and the start of New Century)

One fine summer afternoon van gets a phone call.

Van: hello.

Unknown:........

Van:who is it?

Unknown:........

WHO ARE YOU???

BEEP BEEP BEEP.

Van:woh that was strange.

Just then the door opened and fiona van's wife came in.

Fiona: hi honey.
Van: hi.
Fiona: What’s wrong?
Van: Oh nothing I just got a call but nobody spoke it was a bit strange.
Fiona: Anyway where are the boys?
Van: I think they took their zoids out for a while.

Again the phone rings.

Van: hello.
Thomas: Hey Van it’s Thomas.
Van: Oh hey Thomas how are you?
Thomas: I’m alright but there is something important I need to talk to you about.
Van: Ok what is it?
Thomas: Well there have been reports of a mysterious zoid causing some major disruption near where you live we have men checking it but I thought that you would like to know since its near where you live if you see anything you will tell us wont you?
Van: Yeah sure.
Thomas: Well its been nice talking but I must go goodbye Van.
Van: Ok cya later.

Just that moment there was a big explosion.

Fiona: What was that?
Van: I don’t know lets go.

Van and Fiona ran outside, over the hills there was a big cloud of smoke.

Van: ZEEK!!!!

Out from behind the house zeek came running

Van: Lets go buddy .
Zeek: grrrrrrrr.
Fiona: I’m coming with you.
Van: No stay here I’ll be back soon
Fiona: Ok

Van took the blade liger to go and see where the big cloud of smoke was coming from.

Van: Oh my god no

Both of Van’s son’s Zoids were completely destroyed.

Van: VJ!!!! JAMIE!!!!!
Van: WHERE ARE YOU!!!!!!
B.L: BEEP BEEP incoming transmission ..
Unknown: If you are looking for your boys they are already gone.
Van: Where are they, where have you taken them?
Unknown: Five days from now you are to go to relic city there you will see your children…….BEEP BEEP BEEP
Van: NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

After van returned home Fiona was there waiting for him.

Fiona: What was out there?
Van: Their gone.
Fiona: Whose gone?
Van: Our sons are gone there were taken.
Fiona: No no no no !!!

Fiona fell to the floor and began to cry.

Van: Don’t worry I will get them back no matter what!

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Flyheight_Knight on November 9, 2009, 11:11:06 PM

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Flyheight_Knightwat happens next?

_g0han_smurf on August 30, 2004, 8:27:29 PM

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_g0han_smurfnobody likes me

_g0han_smurf on August 28, 2004, 9:25:19 PM

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_g0han_smurfyAY A COMMENT I ADDED MORE FINALLY

Marik_and_Bakura_lover on August 9, 2004, 11:43:04 AM

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Marik_and_Bakura_loverAWESOME THATS SO TOTALLY MY FAV WOOHOO! yay now that was cool.