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Chapter 1 - The Dream(edit)

Hello!! I finally got my own story now. I kinda mixed the title of KH and Sonic so...ya.

Chapter 1 - The Dream(edit)

Chapter 1 - The Dream(edit)
I woke up in a staggering daze, my head throbbing like a motherf***er. "Ugh! My head!" I opened my eyes to find myself facing downward in a pitch black room-it was hard to tell wich way I was facing-floating in mid-air. Stunned, I dare not move for the fear that I might fall. I winced in pain as the throbbing grew stronger with every thump. When I opened my eyes again, I was standing in Abyss, the darkest place you could find yourself in my village. Abyss was a living creature, swallowing anyone who foolishly enters his torn body of the woods. I start to panic as I realize I am dissolving in the mist, emense pain like lava flowing on my arm. I tried to scream in pain, but my body wouldn't allow me.
Then I see my arm explode with gore and bone. Inside I scream in pure horror and agony. I thought to myself...What an agonizing way to die. Now I feel the pain that everyone has suffered in this forest.
As I fall on the ground, almost fainting from the terrifying sight and demise, I notice a shining light and the mist deperse. Abyss?! Defeated?!I thought in shock. Then I fall back, unconciouss. A word springs through my brain.....



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tayloralisa on April 5, 2007, 10:43:10 AM

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tayloralisaWow Will. Deep just like KH.^_^

devilboy789 on April 5, 2007, 9:26:19 AM

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devilboy789This was not a finished chapter. "U will not enjoy this. I am not Ure king" I quoted on the movie 300...and I have no idea why I did this.