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Chapter 1 - Minas Dait

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Chapter 1 - Minas Dait

Chapter 1 - Minas Dait
One day when Mina the mongoose whas sad sitting on the front step of her house.Sonic came along an said:Whats a matter Darlin.mina said:OOOH nothing.sonic said:dousent look like nothin.So sonic grabbed mina by her hand and took her on a dait when they found a place to eat. the wayterist showed them to thier table Mina still upset!Sonic said:hmm?????????????????the wayter came an said find ur meal i did sonic said Chili dog please sonic asked mina what she wanted an mina whas not in her chair She whas playin pinball laughing when mina was done playin she said:WOW that really hit the spot!THE END DA DA

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Kodina on December 17, 2004, 10:58:08 AM

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KodinaUm, even though this is CC and I will get flamed for it, you really need to use correct grammar, spelling and spacing of words and paragraphs. It helps to run your work through a spellcheck. I do it all the time. It makes your work seem much more polished.

Ja ne~!
~Kodina

Myrlkal on November 29, 2003, 10:47:37 PM

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MyrlkalDing ding, that is NOT Vaporotem's art. She says she's 7 and I believe her, so if she's seven, there's no way you know how to use photo shop. and if that really is your art, why don't you bring it to this website/ HUUUHHH????

Farplain on November 1, 2003, 2:48:17 AM

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FarplainI laughed and I cried!

dynamite9 on October 24, 2003, 8:15:25 PM

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dynamite9huh?????

dynamite9 on September 21, 2003, 1:25:42 AM

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dynamite99,AND ILL GO TO YOUR WEBSITE!:)

minamongoose on August 26, 2003, 12:17:49 AM

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minamongoosewhat the? cool

dynamite9 on July 18, 2003, 3:02:21 PM

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dynamite9he he