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Chapter 1 - Fire

This is this random poem i wrote about fire. its pretty kool. hope everyone likes.
please comment - i like to know if my stuff is good or not!!!!

Chapter 1 - Fire

Chapter 1 - Fire


Fire



When the spawn of air

Meets the child of earth,

A brilliant hybrid is born.

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Lives without a care

Of others' mirth,

Only lives to cower before dawn.

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Every second it lives,

Every life it steals,

It claims its grace from the privilege of meals.

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It hurts, it comforts,

Yet lives unawares,

Of the gifts it gives, and the joys it shares.

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The devil rejoices as its path is carved,

Yet each church gives it head of its charge.

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Shadows flee before it,

Yet darkness finds a way,

To dance upon its greatness,

And linger there to stay.

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For the one who found it,

There is neither life nor death,

But the incessant cloud of darkness

That shall flee before the morning's mist.
























































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nedj77 on April 29, 2011, 2:24:03 AM

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nedj77truth, brillient, and yet a perfectly fit together.

on a scale of 1-10 i give it 1030

bluestar on April 3, 2006, 6:35:01 AM

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bluestarthis is fantastic! you are agreat writer keep it up!! very nice choice of words

Froze8 on December 2, 2005, 6:24:11 AM

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Froze8i like your poetry.
Froze8