Chapter 9 - Hello?
Submitted October 11, 2008 Updated July 25, 2010 Status Incomplete | These are about my life Let me know if you like them
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Chapter 9 - Hello?
Chapter 9 - Hello?
Hello?
Is anyone there?
Im beginning to think
that no one cares
I tell you things
In a serious tone
And you laugh at me
for reasons unknown
If i confront you
You will deny it
But i will know
That you dont care a bit
Blood is what you want
but you cant do it yourself
So you find ways to depress me
And make me do it myself
If you reall did care
You wouldnt let razor meet skin
You would undo this noose
You would take the gun from my chin
How you do it with simple things
I will never know
But somehow i know you love
Will always show
Is anyone there?
Im beginning to think
that no one cares
I tell you things
In a serious tone
And you laugh at me
for reasons unknown
If i confront you
You will deny it
But i will know
That you dont care a bit
Blood is what you want
but you cant do it yourself
So you find ways to depress me
And make me do it myself
If you reall did care
You wouldnt let razor meet skin
You would undo this noose
You would take the gun from my chin
How you do it with simple things
I will never know
But somehow i know you love
Will always show
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lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:27:33 AM
love this one very strong feelingpainblack on June 20, 2010, 12:16:53 PM
painblack on
in the second to last section, in the second like you put mee when i think you meant my. i have a friend that cuts. some people cat or don't ant to be helped, and like you said some people just don't care.DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:41:58 PM
DeathTheKid8 on
i second that! no one really doespainblack on June 20, 2010, 12:24:12 PM
painblack on
hahah! come people cat!! ha! yes some people cat themselves. no sorry i meant cutLuluxKei101 on June 16, 2010, 8:48:12 AM
LuluxKei101 on
Very good, as to be expected by one of the best poets in the world :)iamkira on June 18, 2010, 5:30:00 AM
iamkira on
Awh thanks but this is actually one of the 3 i submitted that night..and im not that great