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Chapter 5 - the return of jafar's revenge

when eleven teenagers relizes that there world is connected
a girl named ally & her friends will go on a journey that they'll never forget.but while the journey continues,ally's memory comes back.what really DID happen & why?

Chapter 5 - the return of jafar's revenge

Chapter 5 - the return of jafar's revenge

as sora & i were heading to the cave of wonders,we didn''t reilze that we were spied by jafar & his cruddy guards ,who were guarding,andrew,donald,goofy,aladdain,genie,abu,& princess jasmine."hmhmhm! i can''t believe that they are falling into my trap,thank goodness that i found sora''s friends & that ~two-tailed~ fox girl''s friend too.but first i''ll play a trick on that two tailed fox first,so that when she screames for help,sora will fall into the ambush while the girl will get eaten by a chain chomp?!" jafar said doing his evil laugh,"send them to the dungon ,& if the two tailed girl is captured,i want her alive so that i can use her as bait for sora"he smirked.while andrew & the gang were sent to the dungon, andrew asked the stupidest question of all,". . . whats a chain chomp?".everybody shrugged except for genie.

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meanwhile...."are we there yet?"i said whining."not yet"sora said smiling.then we saw rose looking for me"rose!!" "huh,oh hi ally,come over here for a moment, i wanna show you something?!"rose said.". . . . .okay"i said running towards her.as i ran off,sora waited for me to return,untill,"ahh!! sora help its jafar!!!!!!!!!!!"i screamed.sora charged to where i me & rose was,but when he got there,rose was gone & only saw jafar holding tails by her neck.i was soo scared of what was going to happen to me."ally hang on!!!!!!!"he yelled as he got out his keyblade & charged at jafar.but then the guards came out of know where & grabbed sora as well."hahahaha!!!,tails is quiet,i wonder why?!" jafar said as the smoke cleared away from him.sora eventually waited for alyssa to appear,but when the smoke cleared"ally,answer me!!"he yelled out. i didn''t say anything,sora saw my tails for a while,but i didn''t move an inch."no!!!,let tails go","indeed i will"jafar said as he letted go of me.sora tryed to move,but the guards were too strong.jafar then picked up my shirt collar, & thew me towards the guards.one of the guards was soo stupid to let go or sora''s arms,sora then caught me but the guards got him again.

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"ally,tails wake up?!"sora said as he tryed his very best to wake me up,but i didn''t move,sora bent down his head & hid a tear from jafar."send him to the dungeons"jafar said as sora & i were dragged towards the dungeon.

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"could i see them now please piff "shadow said being excited again."once when tails wakes up,then you go & see her"said the leader."ah,i''m still thinking about roxas telling them the bad news"said the red haired kid."don''t worry about him,i''m sure that we''llsee him with tails & her friends sonner or later" said the leader as he sented the nobodies to capture tails& the others including roxas..................

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somewhere far far away(i got that off of shrek 2).  . . . . .a boy was running from the nobodies trying to find tails &  the rest of her friends

"huff,huff,huff,i need . . to find . . . . alyssa & her friends before. . . .its too late"roxas said to him self as he was headed stright towards Agrabah to find them & help them with their journey.

end of chapter 5 

only one sneek peak & there it is: on chapter 6,andrew gets mad again,shadow appears & scares the living death out of ally,everyone is out of the dungeon, & maybe...roxas appeares..only on chapter 6 ^_~*

(yay i finished this at 11:31pm,a new record yay me!!!!)  

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darc on July 27, 2006, 2:49:40 AM

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darcVery nice chapter! RUN AS FAST AS YOU CAN ROXAS! And I love that word..chain chomp..even though I don't know what it is..oh well!

LadySymphonia on July 25, 2006, 12:09:55 PM

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LadySymphoniaCHAIN CHOMP!!!!!
*idea*
Me: Axel,come here!!!!!
Axel: W-what is it, mistress Shirley.
Me: *picks him up and throws him into a chaiChomp*
Thanks Tails for the idea XDDD
BUT OMFG TAILS ROXAS IS GON DIE!!!!
OMFG RROXAS APPEARS!