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Chapter 40 - Rebelling Agents

my old story. This is where it was when I started on it A WHILE AGO. Please go to my redone version if you want tobegin it with QUALITY.
If not, stay here and enjoy the crap.
REDONE VERSION: http://www.fanart-central.net/story-56710.html

Chapter 40 - Rebelling Agents

Chapter 40 - Rebelling Agents
Sorry, I've been so busy, but I want to finish this chapter. By the way, prepare for drama, because one of the characters you love...IS GOING TO DIE!!!

Heh, seriously though. Silvergirl13 won the contest. Sorry everyone, but here's a link to the entry for any fan to view. http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-737168.html

I think she captured the evil feeling well, and will deinitely notify you all when the next contest starts. probably in a year or so, for ominous reasons :3


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Agent Y and Agent M walk towards the Midnight's new base with She-Devil following them closely behind. It is late at night, and raining onto them, but they pay it no mind. Agent Y calls back to She-Devil
"Are you sure this is the place?"
She-Devil sarcastically says
"No,i'm sure there's some OTHER building made entirely of shadows. Let's head back."
Agent Y was a bit angry at this, but hid it greatly. Agent M brought out two pistols and shouted
"Burning Roses!"
The two silver pistols turned into blood-red twin revolvers. Roses flew out from the transformation and everyone stared at her in silence. Agent Y asked
"Could you be any more obvious?"
Agent M replied
"This is a criminal, I'm pretty sure he'll get agressive if we try to quit his little gang."
Agent Y walks in as She-Devil follows, but Agent M takes caution and runs up to the wall, hiding out of anyone's sight. She points the revolvers into the shadows, and Midnight is immediately shown when lightning strikes and flashes his face in the light. He asks them quietly
"Well, what are you all doing here?"
Agent Y calmly says
"Me and Agent M are quitting your group. I may have lost to She-Devil but I never agreed to permanently stay with you all."
Midnight asks arcastically
"Now why would you want to leave? You have everything you want here. What happened to the hatred you had for your sister?"
Agent Y clenches his fist at this, and responds
"I've gotten over my anger, and I don't think it's any of your business."
Midnight persisted, angering him more by saying
"I know all about you. You know it was never any prophecy that you were mad about. You were jealous. You had to suffer throught the centuries while your sister lay peacefully underground and you knew it."
Agent Y became enraged at this and shouted
"I said it's none of your business!"
Agent M held him back, pointed one of her revolvers at Midnight and said
"Freeze! I don't think you should anger my friend here. I've had enough of your bullshoot, so we're quitting! Got that?"
Midnight bowed his head and agreed, saying
"Maybe it is time for you to leave..."
Two shades leap out from the shadows behind Midnight, tackled Agent M, and held her to the ground. Midnight continues as the lightning strikes, revealing his face and what looks like a Eric's father. Their voices mix, forming a distorted noise of both of them saying
"...But not in the way you think."
Agent Y leaps at Midnight, Agent M blasts the shades off of her with the revolver, setting them on fire and them disappearing into ash. She-Devil looks at them, and smirks, holding what looks to be a spear behind her back.


(Fight Scene)


Agent Y tackles Midnight into the darkness but quickly is thrown back out. Agent M begins to shoot at Midnight with the revolvers, he dodges the shots but they singe his sides with fire and he begins to flash as Eric's father a few times in pain. Agent M puts her revolvers back as pistols and takes out another one. The pistol transforms into a purple shotgun, and she shouts
"Blooming Iris!!"
Iris petals fly towards Midnight and begin to circle around him as he staggers. She points it at him and says
"Looks like i'll need a bit more power to take you down. Eat this!!"
She fires it off while Midnight is trying to excape, but the iris petals hold him in place. Many iris petals detach from the oncoming bullets and Midnight can no longer see with iris petals surrounding him. Bullets fire through him and pierce the shadowed body. However, he feels no pain from this, and Midnight quickly regenerates the wounds, and he laughs at this, mockingy saying
"You're guns have no effect on me!(flashes to Eric's father) HELP ME! (flashes back) No one can hear you fool. Let me take care of this nuisance."
Midnight starts walking towards her slowly, but Agent Y appears beside him, screaming out a battle cry and punches Midnight square in the face. This knocks him out the wall of the HQ, and backwards 200 feet. Agent Y pants a little, but then runs after Midnight at high speeds. Agent M is surprised, and says to herself
"How come he gets all the super strength?"
She-Devil rolls her eyes, grows out her claws and smacks Agent M on her cheek and she falls down. She-Devil said
"I've had my eye on him for a while, don't get in the way."
She-Devil then runs after Agent Y at high speeds as well. Agent M said
"God damn it! Am I the only one who can't run like a cheetah on crack?"
Agent M then runs out the door, and enters her car, her old police car apparently, and drives after them.




Eric walks down the streets of the city, past all of the people, still feeling left out. He stops walking, and looks ahead, to see the burning buildings he had seen in Midnight's premonition. Midnight spoke to him in his head
"All of this can be avoided if you just give in and DIE!"
Eric shook his head, shaking off what could be possible. He worries about his friends, where had they been? Why had he been left all alone? Suddenly, Agent A appeared in front of him, asking
"You can't possibly be giving up that easily can you?"
Eric looked at him and demanded
"I've got some questions, so you better give me answers. No more riddles!"
Agent A nods, and Eric continues
"...Why have you suddnely start appearing in my life? What did I ever do to make this Midnight guy show up and start to turn my life into a nightmare!?"
Agent A frowned, and sighed, desperately wishing he didn't have to tell him anything. He began to spoke
"I used to be the greatest Agent ever. I lived a good life, had a beautiful wife, and two children that were to become heroes. However, We agents were faced with battling god's soldiers. I knew we were walking into a death trap if we fought them, but I only encouraged everyone, seeking out those who would become heroes in due time. Time is my cruel mistress, Eric. That's how I found you, the agents, and your friends who would one day save the world. Starting with your city is always good though."
Eric was confused, and asked quietly
"I'm...a hero?"
Agent A smiled, and replied
"Of course, to everyone you care about. However, sometimes you have to let people go. I learned that lesson when I was forced to send my family to their demise. I was left alone, for years upon years. So I decided to speed things up a little by waiting. You see, when I wait, time moves faster, and when I disappear and appear in another time, time skips an event. I learned to control my powers over the years, but that's not important right now. What IS important, is that you gather your friends, meet me at the clock tower in 3 days, and when you are ready...we will face Midnight together."
Eric begins to glow with such bright energy that Agent A has to sheild his eyes and Eric says
"I have some loose ends to tie up with my team then."
Eric then disappears in a large green flash that makes all the people around start to wonder what just happened. Agent A says to himself
"He's a good kid, but he's still naive." and disappears into the wind.




Agent M opens her car door and runs out, pointing her gun at the bowled-over Midnight saying
"Freeze! Don't make this any more violent. Let us go, and this'll all be over."
Midnight begins to laugh and stands up slowly saying
"Let you go? I'm afraid this isn't going to end peacefully. I will make sure you die here."
Agent Y is angry at this, and lunges at Midngiht again, fist out. She-Devil quickly slams him on the ground with her spear, and holds him down with incredible force saying
"You can't interfere with this, Agent Y. It'll be over soon."
Agent Y struggles to get out, but cannot lift the spear as it is somehow paralyzing him. Suddenly, IFRIT appears from the sky yelling
"Ashley! I'm here!"
IFRIT lands in front of her, holding his lighter and shouting to Midnight
"Stay away from her!"
Agent M was surprised and asked
"How did you know where I was?"
IFRIT turned back to her and explained
"This tall guy showed up at my house and took me to where you were, saying you were in danger."
Midnight yelled at IFRIT
"This isn't the time for a knight in shining armor. I'm going to end this once and for all!"
Suddenly, the dark sky above got much darker and started to cover over everyone. Midnight rose to the sky and merged with the darkness. The sky then began to literally fall down of them, bringing doom on their heads. No one could see anymore and eventually they were all seperated from each other. Agent M tried to look around for him, but could not see anything. Eventually, she heard an echoing voice from everywhere around her saying
"These shadows will be the death of you,after all...they were the death of me." and began to laugh maniacally as shades began to topple and completely conver Agent M's body. She opened her eyes, to reveal that the shades had bound her arms via chains, and her waist paralyzed, covered in shades. Midnight is walking slowly towards him, and his arm turns into a blade, pointed right at Agent M. She tries to struggle out of the chains but it is futile. Midnight raises the blade and says
"It's too bad you can't kiss your boyfriend goodbye. They say your last moment is reflected in my eyes...let's see about that."
Agent M sees the blade stabbing towards her chest in her eyes, and tears run down her face. Midnight continues harshly
"I have no more use for you anymore...you're fired."
Midnight then impales her through her chest, piercing her heart and hears her scream intensely.
"AHHHHHHH!!!!!" and she falls liimp to the ground.




Everyone hears her scream, and the cover is lifted, revealing Agent M's body laying on the ground, blodd streaming to the ground. IFRIT sees this, and runs over to her. He picks her up and cries, remembering all their times together. Their meeting at the starbucks', their first kiss in the park, and now she was dead in his arms. He picked two pistols out of her pockets, transforming them into the red revolvers and he shouts
"Searing Thorns!"
He points them at Midnight and says
"This isn't over. I'm not IFRIT, anymore. I'll find you, and I'll kill you for what you've done!"
Somehow, IFRIT disappears in a ring of fire. Midnight no longer cares about Agent M, and looks towards Agent Y, who's staring at her body her horror. Midnight walks over to Agent Y, and shades begin to surround his body as he lays under She-Devil's spear. Midnight says
"You've been through some traumatic events, and that makes you vulnerable to me. I'm afraid I'm going to need your body."
Agent Y screams back
"Never!"
Midnight shakes his head and continues
"I didn't ask for permission."
Midnight then engulfs Agent Y in complete shadows and eventually posesses his body, revealing his eyes to be pure black. She-Devil holds the spear on him, and he calls to her
"Lift off the spear, you fool! I've succeded."
She-Devil says
"Not so fast. I've got a deal to make with you."
Agent Y asks in Midnight's voice
"What kind of deal?"
She-Devil said
"I need you to fuse my spear with a shade, in other words, I need a portion of your power."
She-Devil leans in close to his face, and he replies
"I'm suppose I'll have to, fine. Just seal the deal."
She-Devil smiled evilly at this, and says
"Oh, I've been waiting for this."
She kisses him on the lips and draws some of his power out through his mouth. She-Devil released him off the spear when she was done, and she wiped some blood off of her lips saying
"Well, that was surprisingly good. Maybe he was a better kisser after all."
Agent Y got angry at this, and threw She-Devil backwards towards the city, 50 miles away. He looked at his hands and clenched them a few times. He said
"This power, and this hatred. I could work very well with this."
Midnight then ran towards Evergreen City, thinking of a plan. They leave Agent M's body there, and we can see the tears still streaming from her face.



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Whew, long chapter. All for you fans. Well, looks like an agent's dead, and another's posessed. Speaking of agents, I wonder what Agent X has been up to? It's powerful stuff to write someone dying, but I had to do it.

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SilverGirl13 on February 10, 2009, 6:25:11 AM

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SilverGirl13I understand, some characters have to die. When I kill off a character in my comic book I always feel guilty. But someone has to do it.

Great chapter by the way^^*