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Chapter 50 - The Story Ends And It Begins

my old story. This is where it was when I started on it A WHILE AGO. Please go to my redone version if you want tobegin it with QUALITY.
If not, stay here and enjoy the crap.
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Chapter 50 - The Story Ends And It Begins

Chapter 50 - The Story Ends And It Begins
Well, I guess this is it. the last chapter of my masterpiece story. I can't belive I made it, also, here is your choice again.
After the story is over, you can either choose for me to
A)Start writing the sequel, The Tale Of Villains
or B)Re-write this story into a full-fledged book and publish it in a few years.

The choice is yours so I want EVERYBODY WHO READS THIS TO COMMENT. Thank you for your cooperation.


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CHAPTER 50 - The Story Ends And it Begins



"This was it... the moment that would end my suffering. That I won't have to worry anymore...but is it?"
After synchronizing with the heroes, and mentally fusing with Agent A's mind, Eric had become a whole new person. Completely obsessed with destroying his hate, his anger, and his sadness that manifested into the murderous creature they were fighting. All of it was his fault, he thought. Not only were his friends and his personal life threatened, but his agonizing memories of his father's death pushed him into this situation. For Eric, maybe it was better for him to simply "Forget."



Eric and his friends stood together in a group, synchronized to Eric's position, and stared up at Midnight standing ominously at the top of the clock tower. Midnight raises his hands to the sky and shouts
"Revenge, the time is now!"
As Midnight finishes, the army of shades and the heroes dash at one another like a war has begun. The two sides close in on each other as Midnight laughs maniacally at the carnage that is about to commence.



(I think it's about time for a FIGHT SCENE)




Eric quickly punches the first shade and, without haste, the team of heroes splits into a horizontal line to mimic the punch, knocking out 6 of the shades quickly. Eric then suddenly kicks high to defend against a large mallet that a shade threw at him, this knocks him back a bit, and he loses control of his team for a few seconds. Before Eric can retaliate, the shade with the mallet is impaled by Brandon with his right arm sharpened into a long spear. Brandon throws the shade off of him, and spins in a circle, wiping out a few surrounding shades. Brandon helps Eric to stand using his left hand, and quickly says to him
"This is a battle, man. Don't wuss out on me now...Get going."
Brandon pushes Eric back as a large group of shades lunge at Brandon from all angles, carrying large blunt weapons. Brandon smirks, and he quickly brandishes his entire body in spikes, not damaging his agent suit, thanks to the armor. The shades are punctured severely by the spikes, and they liquify as the spikes retract in Brandon's body, he then lunges toward another large group of shades and manages a battle cry on the way. Eric admires Brandon's bravery, and decides to step up his game. Eric quickly takes his right hand and grabs his head, then runs towards the clock tower and Midnight at the top. Tank and May are fighting from the sky, as May flies over a group of shades, and Tank's right arm turns into a gatling gun. He begins shooting a long round at the shades, making plenty of headshots with precise accuracy. May asks drops him onto the ground and starts flapping her wings heavily into the sky to attain a greater height. As Tank falls to the ground, his arm reverts to normal, and his chest compartment opens, revealing a large amount of explosives inside, and he reaches to grab out a large grenade. He closes the compartment as he falls faster into a new group of shades, waiting for him on the ground. He bites the pin off and and lands on top of a shade, holding onto him with his hands, and shoves the grenade down the shade's throat. Tank then jumps off of the shade, just in time before the grenade explodes, destroying many shades in a large group and blasting Tank right next to Agent X. She is using her sword to slice through the shades and quickly lunges through a line of shades, slicing them all horizontally. Tank changes his hands into dual pistols and begins to shoot rapidly at far-away shades closing in on him. Agent X notices Christina nearby and asks her
"I can't believe you're an agent."
Christina crystallizes her right hand in a fist, and punches a shade into a group, freezing them and breaking them all into pieces. She hears Agent X, and quickly replies
"Well, we both lost our memory, but that doesn't stop us from fighting the good fight, right?"
Christina inhales deeply, and then blows out freezing cold air in a circle freezing the shades surrounding them quickly. Agent X speedily hits each frozen shade once and in the blink of an eye, they are in pieces on the ground. She merely replies
"Right."
They both continue to fight through the waves of shades towards the clock tower, and we can see Eric running through the shades towards the tower. Eric can hear Agent A in his head, saying
"Eric, are you ready? This isn't something we planned, you know? I mean, we'll lose all synchronization with your team, and you worked hard to achieve that."
Eric stood still as he responded
"We can always start over later."
Agent A was impressed, and Eric begin to hold his head with both hands as he felt enormous pressure from his brain. The shades surrounding Eric lunged at him with no haste, as they began to be pushed back with a small force coming from the teenager. Eric yelled out simultaneously with Agent A's voice
"Time Frame!"
Immediately, the entire city froze in an instant, and when Eric opened his eyes, they were now pure white, and he saw the city's colors as an inverted white. Everything around him, including the shades and his friends, were frozen in time. Agent A spoke to him
"This is draining so we don't have much time, make your move now."
Eric replied
"Of course."
Eric closed his eyes again, and focused his mind on the shades around him and his friends, on all the shades in the city. In slow motion, all of the shades liquified immediately. All the shades that they were fighting had fallen to the ground, useless. When all of them disappeared, Eric let go of the mental pressure he and Agent A were using, and time returned to normal as Eric was forced to kneel down. The heroes were confused at what happened, but immediately noticed Eric was now panting and in pain. Brandon was the first to yell out
"Alright, Eric! Way to go, man!"
All the heroes surrounded Eric, and helped him to stand up, and even Skate and Inferno congratulated him. She-Devil and "the crows" watched from the office building in awe. Demise was very impressed by his skill and said
"No one could have pulled that off. This kid's one of a kind."
Raven was also impressed, adding
"He sure is."



(End fight scene, I guess)



The heroes now heard slow clapping from Midnight, who began to say
"Bravo, Eric. You've done well, and all of your little friends too. Do you really think it would be that easy? You'd just defeat all my copies and then save the city and your friends, hmm? Well, I don't think so!"
Midnight shoves his hands into the ground of the clock tower, and a long line of his shadow extends down the tower and connects to the heroes shadows', everyone's shadow but Eric's. They wonder what he's up to, but then quickly find themselves captured as their own shadows twiste around them and hold them in place. Midnight pulls his hands out and he becomes Eric's father's corpse as he says
"This is our fight, Eric. Your little friends cannot interfere, now get up here and face me like a man!"
Eric sees his friends incapacitated and is quickly enraged. He knew that this is what he was fighting for. Agent X painfully says to him
"You can do it, Eric...I know you can."
Eric smiles at her voice, but turns back to look at his father's corpse, remaining angry at his enemy. Eric holds his left hand to his hand and yells
"Time Frame!"
Just as quickly as he had stopped time, Eric had appeared behind his father at the top of the half-destroyed clock tower. Eric's eyes continued to remain pure white after the time altering. He and his father began to strafe around each other like a showdown was about to commence. His father said
"So this is what I've become, what YOU made me into. I've become a monster because of you, but is all this worth being happy!?"
Eric continued to stare down his father, replying calmly
"Memories can't be forgotten, I realize that now. I know what I've done, and it's about time I take care of that remorse I felt long ago."
Once they had strafed enough to return to their original positions, Eric made the first move. He ran towards his father who did the same. His father's corpse returned to pure darkness as he lunged at Eric. Eric did not lunge, however, but instead continued running, only to grab Midnight and jump off the clock tower. Eric began to think to himself, and spoke to Agent A in his mind
("I finally know who I am.")
Agent A could feel his emotional intensity, and, slowly smirking, asked
("Then Who are you?")
Eric answered
("I'm a hero.")
They plummeted to the ground at high speeds, and Eric grabbed his father tighter and began to cry, whispering
"I love you, dad."
Midnight's shadow over the corpse began to seep into Eric's head slowly, and Eric's father replied quietly
"You've learned a lot, kiddo."
As soon as they hit the ground a large explosion took place, covering the entire city in a white flash. The explosion seemed to take place in slow-motion, as the white flash engulfed Eric, his friends, Inferno and Skate, She-Devil and the crows, and even the Evergreen hospital.



After a few minutes, the flash was over, and the heroes went over to check on Eric, now in a large hole in the ground, laying next to his father. Brandon lifted him up and shook him a little, asking
"Yo Psy, you alright?"
Eric slowly opened his eyes, at first revealing them to be pitch-black. He blinked once, and then they were pure white, but he blinked a third time, solidifying them as his normal green. He felt a little pain on his head, but simply replied
"Yeah, I'm fine."
Brandon sighed in relief, saying to him
"You had me worried there, man."
Without warning, Agent X rushed over and hugged Eric from behind whispering
"I'm glad you're okay, Eric."
Agent A could feel some shyness in Eric's emotions, and spoke to him
("Are-Are you blushing, Eric?")
Eric blushed a little, but didn't reply. Agent X let go of him to see his friends gathered around him, glad to see he was safe, and congratulating him one by one. Tank and May were happy, saying
"It's good to see you're alive. I won't allow our leader to perish so simply."
"I don't know what we'd do without you, Eric!"
Eric was happy to see his friends care so much about him, and decided that he was glad he was a hero. Eric was hearing a sound from nearby, and saw it to be people safely coming out of their houses in curiosity and news reporters coming thir way quickly. The reporters all gathered around Eric, and started asking him quiestions about what had happened.
"Sir, could you tell us what happened here?"
"Why are you all only kids?"
"Just who in the world ARE you?"
Eric didn't know what to say, but was quickly interrupted when Tank pulled a pistol on the reporters, saying
"This boy has been through a lot, can you not leave him with some peace?"
May yanked his arm away, whispering to him
"No Tank! It's not right to pull guns on people who don't deserve it!"
The reporters back off from Eric, who leans in to one of the microphones surrounding him and answers
"I'm a hero, but I'm also... a man."
Inferno sees this from afar, and helps Skate to stand. Skate sees the heroes getting publicity, and is quickly jealous, saying
"Hey! I helped ya know! It wasn't all them!"
Inferno lets Skate yell, and starts walking away, and Skate follows, asking
"Hey where are you going? I wasn't done talking!"
She-Devil was fairly impressed by the goings on in front of her, and says to Raven
"Well, there goes my chance at staying alive. Looks like my time's up guys."
Raven calmly replies
"We'll do what we can to help you, it's not like master's rules prevent us."
Blood comments from behind him
"They will eventually when 'Plan B' comes up here and chases after her."
Demise shushes him, and She-Devil looks to the hill over-looking Evergreen City, saying aloud
"I may not have found Ben, but I'm pretty sure he'll show up one day."
Eric walks away from the reporters towards the hole in the ground and looks at his father, and the emotions he had repressed are back in his minds, and no doubts are in him. Christina asks him
"So, what should we do with his body? We can't leave him here."
Eric looks to Christina, agress with her, and answers
"We should bury him, honorly, in the one place memories can't reach him."
Christina did not know what he was talking about, and asked him
"Where?"




Later, Eric and the heroes arrive at the cave Agent X was sleeping in, and Eric asks
"So this is it?"
Agent X nodded and answered
"Yes, this is where I caved in after my brother had gone missing."
Eric carried in his father's corpse in a body bag, and laid it on the cave floor. He unzipped the front of it to reveal the face, which had deteriorated from the crash he was in. The wounds on his body were more apparent after Midnight was absorbed, and Eric was finally happy to remind himself of bad memories. Eric re-zipped the face on the bag and eft him on the floor, saying aloud
"Goodbye, Dad. You may have given me some bad memories, but at least you gave me some wonderful new ones."
Agent X was glad to hear that this was all over and that she could finally learn more about this new society she was in. All the fighting and drama left her no time to lolligag. Eric turned to his friends and proudly proclaims
"Let's go home, guys."
Eric grabbed Agent X around the waist and held her tight as he walked back into the city. Brandon saw this, and attempted the same with Christina, only to be smacked on the back of his head again. He quickly retracted his arm so as not to get smacked again. May wrapped her arms around Tank and they all follwed Eric back to his house. Everything was finally peaceful in Evergreen City...







...Or so they thought.
Over the horizon we could see 7 figures standing tall overlooking the city of Evergreen. They all walked forward following the leader, a shapely woman walking towards a small barn next to a tombstone. She stopped, and they all stopped as well. She kneeled down and inspected a large hole in the ground from some incident that had occurred earlier. She said aloud to the others
"Yeah, she's definitely been 'ere. Someone toss me a pack of fags."
One of the small, lanky figures in the back reached into his left pocket and pulled out a pack of cigarettes, giggling and repeating
"Heh, pack of fags."
The figure tossed the pack to the female, and she quickly pulled one out, and lit it with a lighter. She put out the flame and started inhaling a large portion of it immediately. A large, burly man next to her asked her
"You know those can kill you, right? We don't want any foolish mistakes keeping us from our primary mission."
The female almost instantly tossed the cigarette on the ground, stomped on it with her foot, and retorted to the man
"What do I care? It's not gonna matter when we're over this anyway, smartass! You might as well relax, because I'm sure we can handle this."
The female did not care for her colleages, clearly, and went back to looking at the town in the new sunset, loudly saying
"Boys, It's time to raise some hell."
She starts laughing maniacally and another man laughs behind them, in a very deep and maniacal voice as well.



THE STORY OF HEROES:END
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That's it! I've done it! Oh thank god, I'm so happy I finally did it. You have no idea the joy in my heart for this story. It was my masterpiece and one of my good ideas that stuck with me throughout my entire childhood! I've so many people to thank, so let's get to it!

My sister, for reading every chapter and generally being extremely supportive and nice.

nextguardian, a user who kept me going in early times, due to me being down.

SilverGirl13, a user who commented on almost all of my chapters and was very supportive and I appreciate that. Also the only person to enter the contest I had. I say "boo" to you non-participants.

My friends, who thought I was crazy but at least had SOME interest once I told them how much work I had done on this.

My father, who now is forced to read the entire book, because he promised he would only read it once it was finished...AFTER TWO YEARS OF TYPING.

and any people reading this now, I'm so glad people care enough, and once I get serious enough, I PROMISE THAT THIS STORY WILL BE MADE INTO A BOOK AND PUBLISHED.


I'm so proud of myself, my dream actually came true for once. Now I'm going to rewrite it.

HERE'S A LINK, Y'ALL! http://www.fanart-central.net/story-56710.html


I love you all so much, and I'm not gay. I'm gay in the old sense, as in happy. You're awesome, I'm awesome, and egotistical, :) now let's all go have some awesome pie!



WOO-FREAKIN-HOO!

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SilverGirl13 on November 15, 2009, 9:12:16 AM

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SilverGirl13I havent had a computer since early summer... im at my freinds using her's I FINALLY FINISHED READING YOUR STORY!!!! i love it... but majorly clif hanger ending dude... GAH! CLIFHANGERS! UGH!

overlordlaharl on November 19, 2009, 12:39:55 PM

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overlordlaharlso are you gonna read the redone version I'm workin' on?