Chapter 1 - A Seemingly Average Day

Damn, I am a much better writer now. Let's see how much I've improved, shall we?

P.S. New titles and everything!



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A young teen, about 16 years old, steps out of a big blue house. He turned around when he heard a voice call out to him from inside
"Eric! Don't leave wihtout your helmet!"
As he heard this, he saw an older woman, probably in her 40's, throw a bike helmet in his direction. He held the door open with his right hand while his left hand caught the helmet. He replied to the woman questioningly
"But Mom, I'm not riding there. I was planning on just walking."
The woman, now called "Mom," walked towards the boy and patted him on the head. Even though she was old, she didn't look it. She had short brown hair, bright blue eyes, and was wearing a kitchen apron and bright yellow gloves. She was very concerned about her son's safety, and answered him
"I still worry about you falling down or something, and I wouldn't want you to get some sort of head injury. God forbid any other kind."
The teenager was slightly embarrassed, but to get moving quickly, he nodded and replied in a bored tone
"Okay, mom."
He started running along the path outside while carrying the helmet. His mother held the door open and waved goodbye while shouting
"Be back before dinnertime!"
Eric continued running down the sidewalk away from his house, yelling back
"Alright!"



Eric Psyria, a boy no different than most teenagers, began running down the streets of his hometown, Evergreen City. Due to this boy's above-average intelligence, you could easily say that he was quite the model student. Polite, good-looking, and he had quite a clever wit. Eric wasn't thinking about any sort of grades now, though, because it was summer time for him and his friends. A time for hanging out together, and just plain having fun. As Eric continued down the sidewalk, he noticed an old man mowing his lawn and a gorgeous woman watering the plants in her garden. Eric waved to the old man and he waved back with a smile on his face. Eric continued running, even faster now, to get to his destination. The woman watched the boy as he ran, and licked her lips with a strange look of excitement on her face. She dropped the watering can and quickly started walking in the opposite direction as Eric, and smirks while leaving.



Eric arrived at his destination rather quickly due to his running. He stopped in front of a seemingly-abandoned trailer park. A group of 6 trailers were lined up and connected by ramps.Eric could already tell that something ridiculous was about to happen. Eric maneuvered his way past the trailers to the final trailer in the back of the lot. He thought he heard something inside, and put his ear up against the door, only to hear a familiar voice counting down
"3...2...1!"
Eric quickly jumped out of the way as the door was slammed open and out came another teenager on a skateboard. Eric recognized him instantly and shouted as he skated across the park at a fairly high speed
"Brandon? What are you doing!?"
Brandon quickly turned and stopped, eyeing the ramp on one side of the long trailer jump. Brandon turned his head and joyfully smiled as he yelled back
"I'm gonna jump these trailers, Knievel style!"
Eric was concerned for his extreme friend's safety, but figured that he shouldn't deny him of his happiness. He took a step back and nervously gave Brandon a "thumbs up" gesture. Brandon saw this, smirked, and immediately started skating towards the ramp at a very high speed. Brandon skated over the ramp and soared into the air. For a few short moments, Brandon felt the wind blowing in his hair, and saw the trailers pass beneath him as he flew over. Then, just as it began, it was clear to Brandon that he didn't think this through. Brandon landed on the final trailer before the ramp and slammed face-first into the front of the ramp. Eric saw this and quickly rushed to his friend's aid. Brandon felt an immense pain as he fell onto the top of the trailer, defeated. Eric walked up the ramp and jumped over Brandon, landing easily. He helped his friend up by his arms, and asked him
"Are you okay? That was a serious trajectory error on your part."
Brandon slowly opened his eyes and stood up, turning to face Eric with a pounding headache now and felt Eric place his helmet on Brandon's head, saying
"I think you'll need this more than me."
Brandon looked at Eric with sadness and quietly said
"I was sooooo close, man. If there was just one less trailer I could've-"
Eric quickly interrupted him, replying
"Don't you think 5 was enough in the first place? Guess not, because you just had to spring for 6."
Brandon silently agreed in his head. He knew it was a bad idea, but it sounded so cool to him to jump 6 trailers with nothing but a skateboard. As they walked/slumped back to Brandon's trailer, Eric smirked and added
"Well, it was quite a show though."
Brandon sighed, and walked into his trailer by himself, saying
"I'm just gonna go get an ice pack. Wait here."
Eric waited as Brandon slowly shut his front door. He had to admit that he admired Brandon's ingenuity and bravery to actually try to do something like this.



The woman from earlier was now seen walking into a large laboratory. When she entered through the glass doors, there was a lady at the front desk wearing a blue labcoat who stopped her, saying
"I'm sorry miss, but you can't go in there."
The woman merely smiled, and mockingly replied
"Well I'm sorry, but I don't like being told what to do!"
The woman suddenly appeared behind the desk, and slit the lady at the front desk's throat with some sort of claw-like contraption coming out of her left hand. The woman held her mouth shut with her other hand and slowly dropped her corpse to the ground. In a brief flash of light, a new woman appeared from the desk seconds later. She was younger(around 19), had long, fiery red hair, wore high heels, and was now wearing the lady's blue labcoat. She spun around once to see how she looked in it, and disgustingly said
"Ugh, Blue is definitely not my color."
The girl now walked away from the desk and went through the double doors leading to a long hallway. She passed many doors through the hallway, reading the signs on the doors carefully, and eventually arrived at one which read
"Radiation Testing Lab, Do Not Enter Without a Safety Suit."
The girl dismissed the sign, saying to herself
"Pfft, like safety matters at this point."
The girl pushed the door open quickly, and an alarm quickly sounded as men in safety suits started yelling out
"Aaah! Who opened the door!?"
"The whole lab will be contaminated now!"
"Quick! Get out before you die!"
The girl simply stood there as everyone didn't move a muscle while the alarm was going off. After a few seconds the girl simply shrugged, and said
"Well, that was a waste of time."
The girl quickly appeared next to each of the men and stabbed them in the stomach, neck, and back respectively. Before the men could scream or yell, they all just fell to their deaths. The girl walked over their bodies and found what she was looking for, around 10 barrels of radioactive fluid. The girl quickly shed the blue labcoat, in favor of a long red dress. She said to herself
"Hmm, now this is more like it."
The girl then snapped her fingers, and two dark red holes appeared in the ground. Two flying monsters then emerged from the holes with horns, devilish wings, and a strange orange-white color scheme. She then spoke to them quickly, as if ordering them
"Okay, first off, one of you go stop that alarm. It's starting to piss me off."
One of the flying monsters went out of the room and we hear a punching/destroying sound. The alarm immediately stops as the monster returns. The girl is pleased with the silence, and added to the order
"Now, onto business. You two, get moving these into the nearest plane you can find. Naturally, you can kill anyone in your way. We have big things to do in a few hours."
The girl began to laugh maniacally as the two monsters began to pick up and haul the barrels out of the laboratory. The girl then seemed to disappear from sight, but her laugh echoed throughout the laboratory.



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Woo frickin' hoo. I am so awesome. Well there ya go, my first REDONE chapter. I'm introducing less characters at a time so I can get in more character development, since that was what I was missing in the original. I hope you enjoy this more, because I am a MUCH BETTER writer now.

More characters will be revealed next chapter. and I'll be working on this more than anything else. So, sorry if you were looking forward to reading my other stuff.

Later, dudes and dudettes.

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