Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted February 20, 2006 Updated February 20, 2006 Status Incomplete | ahhhh jus a short poem type thingy i wrote....im not a great writer but i like this :)
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Fantasy |
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
something stirs beneath ur feet
despite the blood sweat and mild heat
while you go about your daily span
down below they form a plan
travel down but remain unseen
for their eyesight is very keen
defeat their king become their lord
make them scream for more
work them like the animals they are
become the lord of the underworld
despite the blood sweat and mild heat
while you go about your daily span
down below they form a plan
travel down but remain unseen
for their eyesight is very keen
defeat their king become their lord
make them scream for more
work them like the animals they are
become the lord of the underworld
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Vampiress_Kurama on April 1, 2006, 10:32:16 PM
That was kewl. I liked how it rhymed, I can neveer do that with any of my poems. BTW, thank you for commenting oin my stuff, I have been really depressed lately. If you couldn't tell.