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Chapter 9 - the egg part 2

this was dedicated for my lovers that has a boyfriend

Chapter 9 - the egg part 2

Chapter 9 - the egg part 2
Sunflower stared closely to the egg, the egg staring to move as if life was inside it but she stilled stared at it like if it is an alian than piecies of shell started cracking into little piecies it made a sound.

Sunflower: *gasped*.

as the egg cracked into piecies there was a floating yellow ball than the moving object slowly climbed up from the remaining egg shell left. It turned out to be a chao.

Sunflower: awww arn't you ever so cute!
Chao: chao?
Sunflower: awwww

Sunflower walked with the chao in her arms giving her chao alittle support to the chao but the chao did look hungry so she dicided to roam round mystic ruins to serch food for the chao, she walked round mystic ruins but she never knew her chao properly so she will never know how her chao might react.
Sunflower came through the mystic tempel.

Sunflower: whoa this looks anchent

She diden't notaced her chao was twitching for a while, as she walked closer to the tempel closer she stared at it the chao twitched even harder, she walked toward it than the chao moaned, Sunflower stopped and blinked, than she looked down at her chao whitch was now twitching and moaning, she stoppedand cathered some leaves and rested her chao on the pile of leaves.

Sunflower: whats wrong? c'mon tell me! c'mon

she saw a ripe fruit above her she pulled it of the tree and gave it to the chao the chao was just whineing.

Sunflower: c'mon eat up

still the chao had no response it just moaned, she stared at the chao with mixed emotions of scared and sad than the chao................

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Mightyboy7 on September 4, 2004, 7:35:57 AM

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Mightyboy7k i'm done! It should appear on my profile soon

sunflower_hedgehog on September 4, 2004, 4:45:19 AM

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sunflower_hedgehogsure! you can feel free to do it!

Mightyboy7 on September 4, 2004, 4:41:10 AM

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Mightyboy7Ooh! That gave me an idea for a new pic! Can I make a scene from this chapter on MS paint?

sunflower_hedgehog on September 4, 2004, 1:56:29 AM

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sunflower_hedgehogwhoops ment to be better and a plonker is my sayin of something!

Mightyboy7 on September 4, 2004, 1:53:57 AM

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Mightyboy7Whats netter?
Whats plonker?

sunflower_hedgehog on September 4, 2004, 1:01:49 AM

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sunflower_hedgehogerrrrrrrrr.....so suspence make it netter you plonker! >_>

Mightyboy7 on September 3, 2004, 11:25:18 PM

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Mightyboy7And then the chao... so much suspense from cutting off sentences. And then the chao...

Goka on September 2, 2004, 8:14:14 PM

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Gokanice

Master_Tails on September 2, 2004, 8:27:53 AM

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Master_Tailscool...and awesome...and sweet...

Chibi_Mushra on September 2, 2004, 3:23:08 AM

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Chibi_MushraI like the story so far