Darius

When I said it wasn't good, I meant the backstory. The quality of the picture isn't important. It's what happens in it. It lacks a quality. If the story is great, but told badly, will anyone care for it?

That was what my critique was centered on.

You paint me out to be a bigger villain than I am.

I do.

It would not hurt to ease down the so called "randomness" of your posts. Asking non-sensical questions and such. It seems that Dreamer is increasingly frustrated with such things, with you being mentioned several times in name.