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The Fox That Blew It In The Past Tries To Make Amends In the Present Uned

The Fox That Blew It In The Past Tries To Make Amends In the Present Uned

The Fox That Blew It In The Past Tries To Make Amends In the Present Uned by Falconlobo
The Fox That Blew It In The Past Tries To Make Amends In the Present Uned by Falconlobo


The Fox That Blew It In The Past Tries To Make Amends In the Present Uned

well unedited but the title would not fit

Polly was sad and she missed the Big Cheese.

he was stuck in The Past for about a month now while she was in the Present.

Even though he called her ugly she could not help how she felt about him.

She sighed and thought I can't believe I'm in love with a villain it's silly.

I'm a hero he's a villain it could never work plus he's stuck in the past.

She hugged her Big Cheese plush and went to bed.

The Next morning

she was awoken by a knock on the door.

She put her plush down and went to answer it.

She could not believe it Big Cheese was on the other end with a Bouquet of roses.

Part of her wanted to hug and kiss him and part of her wanted to punch him.

But her anger got the better of her because of him calling her ugly in the past.

And she slammed the door in his face.

Big Cheese was sweating and blushing wondering what he should say to her after what happened in the past.

Polly wondered what does he want she cried a bit and said "go away!"

But she thought at least he's safe.

Big Cheese thought I hope she will go out with me and he said "But Polly"

but froze and thought darn it I hurt her enough.

And I have to tell her the truth no matter if it hurts me or not.

He said "Polly I'm sorry for what happened in the past

and I never wanted to hurt you like that.

I wish I had just followed my heart.

Instead I put my foot in my mouth using a Juvenal ploy to avoid telling you how I really felt to avoid getting hurt myself.

My younger self fell for you as did I.

And I Knew you'd never like me so I said you were ugly.

When truly I felt just the opposite of what I said."

Wait a minute Polly thought does that mean he likes me and thinks I'm pretty?

now she was blushing a bit herself .

She opened the door and threw her arms around him and kissed him.

Big Cheese was a bit surprised by this.

But he now realized she must feel the same about him that he felt about her.

So he kissed her back then they kissed for a while.

And after that kiss Polly said "I missed you and I love you."

Big Cheese said I Love you to Polly and I missed you as well.

"How did you get back to the Present?"

"Well we got stuck in a ice glacier that came out of nowhere

after running from a Dino and it recently thawed."

"wow so that's why you're not dust."

Big Cheese said "I guess the fates wanted us to be together."

Polly said that's a bit corny but really romantic."

The two kissed again and eventually they decided they would get Married.

So A Fox That Blew it in The Past

Made amends with the kitty he loved in secret for so long

And now she was a part of his future

The End

Just A story to explain the pic

and just a guess of how Big Cheese made it Back To The Future still alive.

i Used Colored pencils for the unedited version only

General Info

General Info

Category Anime/Manga » Samurai Pizza Cats
Date Submitted
Views 2106
Favorites... 2
Vote Score 13
Comments 31
Media Colored Pencil / Crayon
Time Taken 40 minutes?
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Shademaster12345 on March 1, 2008, 9:56:28 AM

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Shademaster12345AWWWW SOO CUTE

Amber434 on February 23, 2008, 3:05:55 PM

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Amber434Awww, I kinda feel sorry for them ): Great pic ^^ FAVS

subculturalgirl113 on December 6, 2007, 3:24:39 PM

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subculturalgirl113awwwwwww how adorable thats mean that he would call her ugly :( but im glad he came back with roses hehe ^__^ good work hunny

sisaTao on December 6, 2007, 8:12:56 AM

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Hyper_Kitty on October 19, 2007, 5:42:19 PM

Hyper_Kitty on sweet!

sexxygirl93 on October 2, 2007, 3:51:24 PM

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sexxygirl93awww how sad,,,but still cuuuttttteeee^^
i'll add it to my who entered list thingy ^^GOOD LUCK

InvaderAmmy00 on September 27, 2007, 9:08:35 AM

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royally_spooky on September 18, 2007, 1:55:27 PM

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royally_spookyThis is so romantic, I love it^__^
Nice job on the picture and story.


Neopetgirl on September 15, 2007, 1:06:00 PM

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NeopetgirlAwwww! That was so romantic and cute! I'm glad Big Cheese told ol' Polly his true feelings! Hehe,nice job with the story and pic :)