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Very Punny Polly Unedited With Alternate Story Second Chance Glance

Very Punny Polly Unedited With Alternate Story Second Chance Glance

Very Punny Polly Unedited With Alternate Story Second Chance Glance by Falconlobo
Very Punny Polly Unedited With  Alternate Story Second Chance Glance by Falconlobo


Pretty Punny Polly Unedited with Alternate story description to Very Punny Polly

Second Chance Glance

Speedy chose to fake a cold to avoid fighting Big Cheese cuse he did not think Big Cheese would stand a chance against him.

but decided it was wrong to send Polly to fight him cuse he may against her

So he found Polly on her way to meet him

and told her to let him handle the jerk and she could watch.

Polly agreed but was worried cuse she did not think Big Cheese could handle Speedy's sword either.

Big Cheese being the semi lunkhead that he was started the fight with out them

Meaning he accidentally dropped the sword in the river below the bridge and went in after it.

Unfortunately he forgot his armor was heavy and it made him start to sink.

Speedy and Polly arrived and Speedy said "Where is that Fox?

I guess he chickened out."

Polly just sighed and thought maybe he came to his senses when she heard gurgling noises.

She looked over the side of the bridge and noticed Big Cheese Drowning.

Speedy said "aww it's no fun if the the villain offs himself but a win is a win."

Polly responded to that with disgust and anger "Speedy that is uncalled for he may be a villain but a living being as well!"

He said "Okay okay i was just joking!"

"It's not funny enough with the banter I'm gonna save him."

"How? your armor will weigh you down."

"Okay turn away so I can take it off then!"

"What you're gonna go skinny dipping I thought you were gonna save our mortal enemy."

"Gezze gutter mind I'm wearing shorts and a t shirt under this!"

"so why do you not want me too look then?"

"Just messing with you and I thought you wanted to quit the banter."

"But you were the one continuing it."

"Now I'm serious I have a life to save."

She took off her armor then jumped off the bridge then swam up to big cheese who was losing conciseness.

she swam with him to land and gave him some CPR he did not revive completely but was breathing.

So Polly and Speedy rushed him to the nearest hospital. Speedy left after they checked in Big Cheese cuse he did not like hospitals .

Polly went to check on Cheese's condition but got trapped in an elevator

on the way to Cheese's room she was scared not for her but for Big Cheese.

She did not notice the ghostly figure next to her.

It was Big Cheese sort of.

Why was she crying he would have thought she would be glad to get rid of him.

He thought why did he care this was better for him then fighting.

Or was it?

It pained him to see her cry now it dawned on him why He loved her.

He now knew this was the reason he dreamed of her every night and daydreamed about her every day.

He wanted to hug her but when he tried to he fell right through.

he attempted again and went through her then the wall into a soda machine

and through it he stopped him self went back to the elevator and went it it.

he sat on the floor or rather through it.

Polly finally too notice of his presence and said "Big Cheese if that is your presence I am sensing and if you are wondering why i am crying it's because i love you"

I only wish it did not have to end this way. he said to himself.

The elevator started again and they went into the room where Big Cheese was.

Polly sat down in a chair besides Big Cheese hoping her sensing his presence before did not mean he was dead only that she was upset.

Big cheese wished to tell Polly he felt the same but knew it was not to be.

When he thought this his Spirit was flung back in his body.

And The heart monitor beeped that he was alive.

He said weakly Polly I love you too and thanks for saving me.

She was surprised but happy at his revival

But what happened next surprised her and made her happy more.

He drew her into a kiss so she kissed him back.

Next after the kiss he proposed to her and said he wanted to drop the evil act and to become good along side with her and the other cats.

She said "okay but get better first don't want you collapsing on our wedding night to early."

He snuck another kiss then went to sleep with new dreams of hopes for the future

Polly took a nap in the chair with the same dreams

The End

same pic different story

and just colored pencils

and white cellophane marker^^

rated mild violence for almost death

General Info

General Info

Category Anime/Manga » Samurai Pizza Cats
Date Submitted
Views 1608
Favorites... 1
Vote Score 3
Comments 15
Media Other drawing
Time Taken 25 minutes? I forget
Reference pic of her


Comments (15)

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Morpher on January 8, 2008, 11:01:52 AM

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Morphernice story kewl pic^^

PrincessFatCat on January 4, 2008, 6:05:05 PM

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PrincessFatCatCute! I like the pic and the story Nice job! ^__^

darc on December 29, 2007, 12:31:47 PM

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Very good story and the pic is sweet!
Great job. ^^

sisaTao on December 7, 2007, 4:13:07 AM

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sisaTaoAw, cute! You did a great job on the pic and story.^-^

FullMoonRose on December 7, 2007, 4:01:57 AM

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FullMoonRoseit is so kool and the pic has nice color

subculturalgirl113 on November 25, 2007, 3:01:04 PM

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subculturalgirl113you did a great job on this story/photo hunny *favs* ^___^

AnimeX on November 25, 2007, 6:05:22 AM

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AnimeXthat's really cute! ^__^
awesome story/pic!

Neopetgirl on November 11, 2007, 11:35:56 AM

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NeopetgirlAwww! Hehe so cute,I've always loved how this one looked!

Candycane9 on November 8, 2007, 10:48:50 AM

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Candycane9Aww soooo cute! I lovvie the colors.