untiteled pic

I like it the way it is all you have to do is color it now *faves* you rock :)

Well, I think luckylace222, kylaVegeta, and darthexodus pretty much said it all.

1. Hands are too short for her large head. Open your palsm and draw what you see to create more full/real-looking hands. 

2. I really like how the eyebrows are bolded. Bold the rest of the lineart that way to make it stand out more. 

3. Her breasts should be more pear-shaped. 

4. The side of her ribs going do w to the waist should have a sort of curvy V shape, not a roundish shape. 

5. More distinct eyelashes would bring out the eyes more. Make the eye smaller. 

6. Are those tentacles coming out form her head?!

Let me see will square it off or send me it in a email and I can make it squared off for one and add color that's all ad I like the lower body forum yay

Hello~ Came to check it out as you said. And well I do agree with everyone so far. Where you are in your skill level this is good but can take some refinement that will come with time and everything. Such as hands and the like. Since the other's kinda pointed out what appears off. May I suggest something to help? What I do whenever I sketch is use guidlines. Do you do that? If you do then you have an amazing eraser. If you're wondering this is the guidelines I use: ​http://kylavegeta.deviantart.com/art/Sketch-Dump-348810163 ones on the face and I start with a stick figure to get my pose and then circles for hands and feet to help get placement. Sooo maybe with that it will help you improve on things such as proportion and facial structer. I wish you luck. You already have alot of good aspects in your drawing style, Keep up the work. I hope my advice helped you and everything. Good luck~

also I love the way the crystal looks~

hmm. its eh ok. better then what i can do. i like the hair it nice and loose but classy like a princes or an Heiress(or goddess i dunno what you where going for). i also like the tiara. its elegant but simple in a good way. i also like that you gave fuller hips then alot of anime character it shows she's a women and not a little girl or a teenager.

though i do have alot of critics about this picture. one is the same with Velasgirls and Dreamfire. the hands are too small and dont look realistic, ones cut off in the pictures as well. her arms also look elongetted and it hard to tell were the elbow is on her, the left shoulder was nicely done but the right is off, making  it look smaller and skinnier then the left. her breast are a little too.....how do i put this....  it feel like there no... umm they look too rounded i guess you can say. and the last thing is her eyes this is something i noticed right away. her eyes are too far away from her nose. it gives this long face look, and gives it an awkward.

those critisms(missplelled) aside this is an ok pic. not a masterpiece but then again there are rarely works that are. this too me is like one of those pics that are an early work for an artist. it might not be great but its more of a stepping stone for something greater. i hope i dont sound like an asshole.Pardon spelling a grammar error please.

i like it too, and agree with Velagirls about the hands, but i Really like how you made the crystal on her chest seem like its glowing :D

Looks good

Probably redraw the hands