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Balke

A bit of original fiction. Crime/mystery I suppose.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: August 30, 2004 • Updated: August 30, 2004
Word count: 2540 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 303

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theWriter on January 31, 2006, 9:06:34 AM

theWriter on (Chapter: 1)
theWriterI'll never understand how the truly interesting and original writing never gets commented upon. It must be an attention span thing. Oh well.

Great, great voice. The originality was brilliant and that little snap at the end made for an amusing and clearly sharp piece of work. My only complaint was how small the font was. Otherwise--I was impressed. Your writing style reminds me somewhat of Jeffery Deaver and Patricia Highsmith...which is a compliment.

Tres bien.