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Chapter 2 - The Encounter

This story is about a normal girl who falls in love with a not so normal guy.They end up going through a lot to be with each other but the question is can they be together ? ocXoc

Chapter 2 - The Encounter

Chapter 2 - The Encounter
Im so sorry it take a while to add a chapter i was busy studying for 3 test this week and for next week anyway here is the 2nd chapter and as promist i made it longer and better so enjoy.
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Walking

I was walking along on a side walk,Then I started to cross the street but did not see a car coming my way when....



Beeeepppp



Ahhhhhh



Woosh

The car kept on going by,I looked up to see who had saved me,Staring down at me was a pair of onyx eyes,That were somewhat cold and mysterious,He then put me down,Which I had been in his arms when he had saved me.Now I can finally get a better look at him.He was tall cause I had to look up at him,I only came up to his chin when I was able to stand again,With pail color skin oh most white even,Sleek black color hair,Very well build muscles,And he was wearing a black hoody,Dark blue jeans,Black sneakers.But the thing that stood out th most was his eyes,those cold yet mysterious eyes that I find my self getting lost in and unable to look away.

" Thank y- " I tried say as I blush but got interrupted by someone.

Turning around I could see my bestfriend running to me.

" Alena " Said Alisha

" Alisha ? " I Question

" I just saw what happen,and are you ok " Asked Alisha

" Yeah im fine thanks to him " I said as I turned around to the guy that save me.

But when I turned around he was gone.I then turned back at Alisha.

" Who ? " Asked Alisha

" The guy who just saved me from getting hit by the car.But he's gone " I said

" Weired,he must be really fast then " Said Alisha

" Yeah and I didn't even get to finish saying thanks to him or even ask what his name was because you interrupted me " I Said

" Oh Im sorry but Im sure you'll see him agian, get to say thanks and find out his name too " Said Alisha

*sighs*

"I hope so too " I told her

But little did I now that she was right and I was going to see him again soon.

" Well we better head too work before were late " Told Alisha

" Yeah I guess your right " I Said

We both started to walk away towards our work "Blossom Cafe" but what we didn't know was that up high in a near by tree,amongst the leafs,was someone watching them and that someone had a pair of cold paircenting onyx coloured eyes.



Soon me and Alisha arrived at work,went into the back to change into our cafe uniforms.Then we came back out to start woring,Alisha went to one end of the counter and I went to the other end,And we both started to work our own cashregers,taking some orders of the people who ever came in to over.



The rest of the moring went by and we served many people who came into the medium size cafe,we were just about to go on our break when I hard the bell above the door *ring* as the door open to the same pair of cold onyx coloured eyes from earlier looking at my own sky blue eyes.As I soon found that I could not look away from his own eyes.But some part of me did not want to look away.He started to walk towards my end of the counter,as I started to blush when he finally got to the counter.

" Hi welcome to Blossom Cafe,What would you like to order? " I said still blushing

" Yeah I'll just have black coffee,no suger. " He said while look at me

" Sure It will be ready in a few minutes " I Told him as I smiled.

* Nods *

He walks away and sits down at a table near a window.



I went in back a bit and started to make his black coffee,soon It was done and I picked it up,walked over to his table,then I put his coffee down on the table.

" Here you go " I said smiling

" Thanks " He said

" Yeah,by the way I wanted to thank you for saving me earlier.Since I nevered got to finest saying it before my friend came,So thank you " I said

" your welcome " He said

" Mind if I sit here,since my break just started now " I asked him

" Sure " He said

I then sat down on the oppsite side of the small table.

" So whats your name? " I asked him

" Drake " He told me

" Oh thats a nice name " I said to him

" Yeah and yours? " Drake asked me

" Mines Alena " I told him.

" yeah " Drake said.

We talked for a while but what we did not know was that someone was watching them up high in a tree from out side the cafe place.

" Looks like hes takeing a liking to this girl..." Said a Dark voice.

" Hmm.... I think you should pay her a visted and have a "Nice " talk with her" Said HIM

" Yes my lord " Said the dark voice as he left.

" I wonder what you would do it something were to happen to her Drake " Said HIM

After that was said he vanished in thin air.



Back in the shop with me and Drake,I had just finest talking to him and got up to leave to start back at working.

" Well my break is over now so I have to get back to work now " I told him

" Hn,and I have to get back home befor dark for so things " Drake said to me

" Since you know where I work,I gusse I'll see you here again tomorrow,so bye " I said to him abit sad that he has to leave

" Yeah I'll be back tomorrow so bye" Darke said

And with that he got up paid for his coffee and walk out the door,out of my site.I then went over to my side of the counter,I looked over to see Alisha coming over to said something to me.

" I saw that " Alisha said to me

" Saw what? " I ask

" I saw you flirting with that guy you were sitting down talking too " Alisha Told me

" I was not " I argued back while blushing

" Sure,so was he the guy who saved you this moring from that car " She asked me

" Yes and thats why I was over there,I was just saying thank you and I also asked his name,then he ask for mine soon we started talking while I taked more then him so thats all " I told her

" Ok,so what was his name? " Alisha asked me

" His name is Drake " I said to her

" Wow thats a cool name " She told me

" yeah It is " I said

" So did you give him your number? " Alisha asked me

" Maybe " I said to her

" Ohhhhh you so did,and you know it " She said all nowing at me

" So what if I did,he's new around here so I gave him my number so at least he'll know some one nice here " I argued back

" rrriiiggghhhttt,anyways is he coming back here" Alisha asked

" I don't know he said he will but I really hope he does come back here " I Told her.

" Well I hope so too " Alisha said

" Why's that ? " I asked

" Cause that way you too can get to know each other more then you too can start dating and maybe become boyfriend and girlfriend " Alisha told me

" What I don't like him like that and besides were only friends " I said back

" Maybe one day you two will be more then friends " Alisha said

" You knows will just have to wait and see " I Said

With then said Me and Alisha went back to work for the rest of the day.Then we wnet home for sleep but I fell asleep dreaming of Drake as a blush formed on my face as I sleeped.

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There all done for Chapter two and again Im sorry I was Late for updating but here are some reasons why Im late/not updateing -

1 : Im real lazy.
2 : To many other storys to wright.
3 : To many pics to darw.
4 : Just plan to busy.
5 : Busy studying for test/quizs in school.
6 : Or just don't want too.

But I will update In time so I hope you can wait.Oh and I hope you like this chapter,If you have any good ideas for this story please tell me ok.So read and review.

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HikariYugiYamiAtemu on April 8, 2008, 8:46:04 PM

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HikariYugiYamiAtemuawww...that's sweet! ^^

and I agree with what Kay said too..^^;

KionaKina on April 7, 2008, 9:31:40 AM

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KionaKinaI lov eit! but I gotta point out one thing.

Your actions are written kinda off.

For example, you wrote *Nods* instead of saying "he nodded" or sometihng like that. I personally recommend not doing that in a story like this. It makes it kinda awkward.

And the parts in italisis, you may want to make it less like "He walked away" and make it more like Alena's thoughts.

These are just osme suggestions to make your writing a little stronger. Feel free to ignore me.

I liked it a lot! This story is intruiging.