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Chapter 1 - Lilith

This is a story about Adam's first wife.
Short and simple.

Chapter 1 - Lilith

Chapter 1 - Lilith
Disclaimer: I don’t own the character, she
belongs to the world below.

This is a story about Adam's first wife.
Short and simple.


Lilith

Out of the belly of the earth she sprouted
as the moon dared to give her skin it's shine
the midnight sky colored her hair pit black
and the stars gave the sparkle in her eyes.

Before Eve, to Adam she was his wife
with her mermaid song she won his love
but afert seeinf how simple he was
she left his side, breacking his heart.

Centuries ago, she came to see our world
wearing the most beautiful of her smiles;
with her always long white dress, she seems to fly
like a white rose dancing by.

Oh, maiden from hell
you're so beautiful and devine
despise all the evil in your heart
there is no doubt you've won mine.

Demons and gods ask to themselves:
WHAT HAVE WE DUNE?
WHAT IS THIS EVIL WE RELEASED INTO THE WORLD?
well, you may call her Lilith, but i just call her ROSE





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manachan on September 9, 2006, 10:08:23 AM

manachan on
manachanI love it^^
 
I always hoped someone besides my family and i knew of Lilith and now there is and this was very well written i heart you ^^
 
 
love
manachan

Ana on September 9, 2006, 1:38:36 PM

Ana on
AnaWell, mighty thanx, love. The poem was based on this pic that i've made long ago http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-230838.html. In the firt page of my gallery there some others pics of her. I got many others here but since she appear to atrack little attention, i haven't post them. Some of them i have trown away. Burned into ashes.