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The Other Half

Yuuko asks Watanuki to deliver a bracelet to his least favorite person. Will he finally realize what's seemed so obvious to everyone else? Or is Yuuko just wasting her time? (WatanukiXDoumeki)



Chapter 1 - Someone To Walk With
Submitted: May 19, 2006 • Updated: May 19, 2006
Word count: 3047 • Size: 44k • Comments: 2 • views: 365


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KingdomHeartShera on October 17, 2006, 3:58:49 AM

KingdomHeartShera on (Chapter: 1)
KingdomHeartSheraZOMG, this is awesome! ^^ I love Watanuki and Doumeki!! XD Um, this might be a spoiler to you, but: you do know that Watanuki loses the use of one eye, right? He sacrifices it for Doumeki. Wasn't sure if you knew or not. ^^;;

Anyways, you did an excellent job on the characterization! I don't know if I could do an Xxxholic fanfic; Watanuki spazzes too much for me to write about him. But you did great! Watanuki's just a drama queen! XD

I can't wait for more chapters of this. Keep it coming! You're definately going on my fave list. <333

By the way, do this to get rid of the grey and white bars:

1) Submit it in Microsoft Word

2) Go to "Edit" and press the option where it says to type into the site.

3) It'll hopefully show you the page with your story on it; while there, you can fix everything, from the spaces between the lines to the format.

I hope it works for you like it did for me. :)[color]

Starkiller on August 22, 2006, 5:38:37 AM

Starkiller on (Chapter: 1)
StarkillerLove it so far. You did a wonderful job with characterisation. I couldn't honestly tell any difference from the way the manga portrays Doumeki & Watanuki. Off to read chap 2 now ^^