Username   Password  
Remember   Register   |   Forgot your password?

Chapter 3 - The begining

This is really similar to the real series. The only difference is that it's got my own charaters and Zuko, Aang, Katara, Sokka, Toph... well every one accept Mai. Oh, and the episodes are different.

Chapter 3 - The begining

Chapter 3 - The begining
Book 1


(It's chapter number 3 because the other two chapters are the same as the real ones)

Zhou:I heard your ship was destroyed because of Zuko.
Head Pirate:Yes, yes it was.
Pirate 1:Hay, how do you know that?
Stupid Pirate:Do you, do you h-have psychc powers.
Pirate 2:Of caurse he doesn't you idiot!
Pirate 3:Your planning something aren't you!
Pirate 3:Well what's in it for us!
All Pirates:Yeah what's in it for us!
But a few young Pirates:Gimme, gimme
Zhou opened up a chest full of gems and gold bricks.
The pirates eyes sparkled
Every single pirate:Heh... heh, heh.
Then you could hear pirate laughter!(HAVE YOU EVER HEARD THAT!)


Iroh walks into Zuko's room
Zuko:If you want me to play an insterment you'll get no where!
Iroh:I wasn't going to, I was just going to ask you if you wanted to go for a walk with me...
Zuko rolls over and faces the wall.
Iroh:Or you could just lie around in the dark.


While Iroh was on his walk pirates snuck onto Zuko's Ship and put dinamite on it!
Zuko walked out of his room... BANG!!!
The dinamite exploded!
Zuko quickly ran up to the Captains room but... the Captain wasn't there.
All was lost...WAIT!
I just read the wrong ending(Silly Narata)


Zhou:I'm so sorry to hear what happend to Zuko.
Iroh:If it's ok may I go outside.
Zhou:Sure
Iroh and Zhou go out of the room in different doors.
Zhou turns to a hiding pirate(I don't know where the pirate was hiding! I wasn't there!).
Zhou:Our plan is working perfectly.

Iroh turns to a guard and a hiding girl(For the same reason I don't know where she was hiding).
The guard takes his mask off...
AND IT'S... ZUKO!!!
Iroh:Zhou doesn't suspect a thing.


Do you really want know how Zuko was saved?
Well here you go.

Well somehow a girl got into Zuko's ship(Don't ask me I may have wrote this but I don't know how she got in there! Ask the girl). She grabbed Zuko by the arm and a Firebenders uniform and somehow got it time.
Not very exiting I know... SORRY!
I don't like either.

Comments

Comments (2)

You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment

shadowpiplup on October 20, 2008, 3:22:09 AM

shadowpiplup on
shadowpiplupWow, good job I really like that <:D

AvatarFanZukoFanTOO on October 20, 2008, 9:00:05 AM

AvatarFanZukoFanTOO on
AvatarFanZukoFanTOOYess!
Finally my first comment!
I'm glad you like it, It'll be more exiting when I get to write book 4!