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Chapter 1 - Maria's Gone

This is pure genius.I took the idea from Sonic x.Most of the lines are from Sonic X.Black Doom is in it too!!

Chapter 1 - Maria's Gone

Chapter 1 - Maria's Gone
Gun : Its the creature! She is setting it free!

Maria sets Shadow free and he helps defeat the GUN army.The soldier sees Maria,
and she starts to run.Shadow sees them and tries to save Maria.
GUN corners her.

Gun :Don't touch that lever! I'm not fooling around here!

Maria touches the lever and GUN shoots her. Shadow is furious. He kills the army.
Shadow sees Maria dying on the floor.He runs towards her and holds her hand.

Maria :I won't be here for long Shadow...promise me that you'll help people...and be...friends
with them...

Shadow: MARIA!!

Maria :I'm sure you will be very happy down there Shadow.I only wish I could go with you.
The world looks so beautiful from up here in space...but my Grandfather says that the people
down there face many problems.Thats why you were created...to help those people and to be
their friend... ( Maria then sadly dies in Shadows arms)

Shadow :No...Maria!!
(Shadow then starts to cry and hugs Maria)

Black Doom :Shadow,leave her,she is no longer a part of your life...she is dead.

Shadow :We can't just leave her here!!

Black Doom :Don't worry. I will take care of it.

Shadow puts her down gently.He pecks a kiss on her cheek.He then takes one last look at
Maria and wipes the tears from his eyes and leaves Maria in the front of the Ark...

Black Doom : Come Shadow I have an assignment for you...

TO BE CONTINUED...



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ShadowAndMaria4Ever on June 14, 2009, 2:43:56 AM

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ShadowAndMaria4Ever*Starts crying* My username explains it all...

BexManic010493 on December 28, 2006, 4:36:30 AM

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BexManic010493sorry! ^^ cant think of more! heh.

i might need help from my m8 thefinalshadow02 (i think thats his name! XD) to help me think of another part.

Shadowthe_hedgehog on May 31, 2006, 4:36:07 PM

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Shadowthe_hedgehogAWWWWWWWWWWW, poor Shadow  great story ^^  MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!