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Chapter 1 - AOC

My first funny poem!^_^

Chapter 1 - AOC

Chapter 1 - AOC
Woke up,
feelin' drowsey.
my arm hurts,
my head is pounding.

the alarm is ringin',
on and on.
I'm at wits end,
They're almost gone.

I can hear my sister
playing downstairs,
the smell of pankakes
sifting through the air.

So I force myself up,
but I'm too lazy.
I can't function right,
I'm downright hazy!

Turn off my alarm,
I'm going back to bed.
Then I woke up-
I felt my mom hit my head...

...OWW...

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Wet_Noodles on December 27, 2005, 9:54:26 AM

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Wet_NoodlesIt was awesome- I can relate!

Chibichan on November 1, 2005, 10:11:01 AM

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Chibichandon't worry, we all hate alarms. ^_^

LizzardQueeng on July 7, 2005, 11:35:28 PM

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LizzardQueengLmao! Funny lil' poem of spiffiness XD

BlizzardComics on May 9, 2005, 11:46:46 AM

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BlizzardComicsThank you^^

Fujiko on May 2, 2005, 6:20:23 AM

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FujikoDamn funny poem... ha ha ha... my moms never hit my head (my mom wouldnt touch me head)well keep it up

strawberry_kissez on March 11, 2005, 7:58:04 AM

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strawberry_kissezlol good job!

Enjeru on October 30, 2004, 4:30:46 PM

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EnjeruALARM CLOCKS ARE EVIL!!!!!!!! Not like Muffins! Muffins are like corn........ and corn is NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE! YAY!!!!!!!! *Ish completely off topic* Umm....... yeah. Good poem!

tHe_dOOna on September 10, 2004, 8:45:27 AM

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tHe_dOOnawoah!! @.@ my mom did dat to me once...she smacked me upside my head...ouchiez...i can still feel the pain!! i luv dish one...

Rune on September 8, 2004, 9:10:56 AM

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Runegreat poem. i really like it. i wish i could write a poem like that but i suck at writing. Anyways great poem.