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Chapter 1 - Naraku's Barrier chapter one: Separated

This is my first fanfiction it's a InuyashaxKagome and SangoxMiroku fanfiction it's mainly about Sango and Miroku. Sango and Miroku get stuck inside of Naraku's Barrier and Inuyasha and Kagome cant go in and somethin bad is going to happed read to fi

Chapter 1 - Naraku's Barrier chapter one: Separated

Chapter 1 - Naraku's Barrier chapter one: Separated


Naraku's barrier

Chapter one: Separated



Kagome decided to leave Shippo with Kaede in the village. Inuyasha, Kagome, Sango, Miroku, and Kirara headed out to the forest.



Kagome: we will pick you up later Shippo.



Kagome shouted as they went into the forest. Kagome and Inuyasha where yelling at each other and Miroku got slapped by Sango the slap left a red hand print on the right side of his face. Then Inuyasha stopped arguing with Kagome.



Kagome: What's wrong Inuyasha?



Inuyasha: I smell him, Naraku, he's up ahead.





Kirara transformed into her big form and Sango and Miroku rode on her. Inuyasha was carrying Kagome on his back and they set off. Inuyasha and Kagome where leading. SLAP! Miroku this is No time to be doing that! Sango screamed. Miroku now has a red slap mark on the left side of his

Face. A barrier was rising and formed around a big section of the forest. Naraku's poisonous insects where all over. Inuyasha hit the barrier and fell back but Kirara went right through it.



Inuyasha: What the Heck!





Miroku and Sango didn't notice Inuyasha and Kagome where gone until they looked back a few minutes later.







Back to Kagome and Inuyasha





Kagome: oww my head… Hey where are Sango, Miroku and Kirara?



Inuyasha: I think they went through the barrier; I have a bad feeling about this...



Kagome: I hope their going to be ok.



Inuyasha: Wait I smell Naraku, and I'll bet he's in that barrier.







Back to Sango and Miroku



















Miroku: Wah! What was that? Miroku said covering his face.



Sango: You felt it to, it must be Naraku!



Sango Tugged Kirara's mane and Kirara sped up. The evil aura was getting stronger and the air getting thinner Sango had her mask on and Miroku almost fainted but revenge kept him going. The Saimyosho where attacking Sango and Miroku. Kirara got stung three times and the poison was taking effect and Kirara collapsed. Sango and Miroku destroyed all the poison insects. Sango went over to Kirara, Kirara had transformed back to her original size and passed out Sango gave her the last of the antidote and gave Kirara to Miroku, Miroku put Kirara in his robe Sango grabbed her boomerang bone, Sango and Miroku ran on the path deeper and deeper into the forest until they heard an evil voice from the shadows...









Back to Inuyasha and Kagome







Kagome: I'm getting worried Inuyasha.



Inuyasha: I'm kind of worried my self but we both know that Sango and Miroku are strong So don't worry so much besides all we can do is wait till the barrier lifts. I hope they don't do anything stupid this is Naraku where talking about or it could be a fake But still, don't get killed you guys.







Back to Sango and Miroku





Sango and Miroku stopped dead in their tracks a figure jumped out of the shadows.



??????: So you are looking for the Shikon Shards are you not?



The figure said holding out there hand with three shards

Glowing in it.



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Inu_lover1644 on January 27, 2006, 8:12:15 AM

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Inu_lover1644wow, thats weerd
i don't think somebody would just give up the shards
but hey this is ur story!

FATE_The_Pirate on August 17, 2005, 2:23:16 AM

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FATE_The_Piratecoolies chapter ^_^ loves it XP YEAH Inuyasha WOOT WOOT XD write more please O_O

black_tears_never_fade on March 30, 2005, 11:52:20 AM

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black_tears_never_fadeawesome first chapter!!!!