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Chapter 1 - Beyblade Christmas Party

This is the first thing I've ever submitted! It ain't that good but oh well...

Chapter 1 - Beyblade Christmas Party

Chapter 1 - Beyblade Christmas Party


A Beyblade Christmas Party




[ulist]
doorbell * Mr.D: Hello kids there are drinks and cookies- Max: COOKIES! * attacks Mr.D * Give me cookies NOW! Kai: Calm down we're going to open presents first… Tyson: Presents! * finds his present * This is from Kai… * opens * A book? * reads title * How to be Smart for Dummies! Max: Me next! * rips open present * What! * eye starts twitching* Sugar-free soy cubes!?! * attacks Kai * Kai: ACK! XP Ray: * opens * Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! A dog robot toy! * jumps on curtains * Toy: Bark bark bark… Kai: * being strangled * I knew that would be a good one! Max: Shut up you, you… * pops into nice Max * Hi Kai. Kai: Can you let go of me please? Max: Ok…* lets go * Mr.D: Maybe we should take a break from presents… All: Ok…
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At the fireplace

Kenny: OMG! Kai! You're on fire! Kai: Wha- * looks down at cape * AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Get it off get it off! Daichi: * throws water on Kai * There you go Kai! Kai:* spits water out of mouth * thanks… Daichi:* whispers * Did you get that? Kenny: Yup I got it all on tape! Both: HAHAHAHA! Kai: I hate my life… * walks in front of bus filled with fangirls * Fangirl 1: OMG, like its Kai! Fangirls 1-bazzilion: Kai! Fangirl 2: I got his cape! Fangirl 3: I got his glove and shoe! Fangirl 4: So, I got his pants * pulls pants out from behind back * All: Ooooooooooooooh… Kai: * looks down * Ahhhhhhhh! * mumbles * I'm going back to the party… Fangirl Leader: We could sell this stuff on the internet! All: To the internet. AWAY!



Party



Ray: Ahhhhhhhh! * being chased by dog toy * Get it away! Kai: * covered in kiss marks and torn clothes * Stupid toy… * kicks toy * Ray: My hero * glomps Kai * Kai: * eye twitches * Ray: Eeep! *lets go and runs into a wall * Meowwww…



At food table



Max:* stars in eyes * Mmmmmmmmm… * jumps into cookies and starts swimming around * Hilary: Hey Max, how are you doing that? Max: Hmmmmmmm… I don't know… * pops into evil Max * EAT COOKIES (beep) *shoves cookies down Hilary's throut * Gah! X0 Mr.D: Well you look like your having fun. Max: Shut up grandpa! Mr.D: *eye starts twitching * GRANDPA!?! * chases Max around *

Under the mistletoe



Tyson: Hey Hilary… We're under the mistletoe… * gets kissy face * Hilary: AHHHHHHH! * sheilds self with Kenny * Kenny: Tyson! Stop! Tyson: Why? Kenny: Ummmm, I'm allergic? Tyson: Cool! * chases Kenny around with kissy face but bumps into Max * Max: Oh!* pops into nice Max * Hi…*flutters eyelashes * Hehe. * chases Tyson around with kissy face *



Later at night



Mr.D: Well I hope you all had- Kai: Shut up, we're goiing home…*walks out door * Never mind I'm staying here I don't want to lose any more clothes… All: Huh? * look out window * Fangirls: HI KAI! All: oh…* push him out anyway * Kai: * being carried away by fangirls * I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU ALL! Daichi: Should we go get him? All: Nah….

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MaoHiwatari on May 12, 2006, 10:00:12 AM

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MaoHiwatariNot funny? Blue Paint, are you crazy? I am still laughing! The story is so funny. Can you write another?

super_neek on February 19, 2006, 5:46:46 AM

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super_neekhahahaha! thats all i got to say!

KrimzonGaurdTala on November 5, 2005, 11:43:48 PM

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KrimzonGaurdTalayou might not think you did a good job, but ive been in a pissy mood all day, and the story made me laugh so im happy ^_^

Yukina-chun on August 2, 2005, 3:35:40 AM

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Yukina-chunhahahhahahHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!! Kai!!! HAHAHAHAHHA!!! Okay...calm down Yukina...AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!
Funny Story and KAI...hahahHAHAHA!!!! Poor Kai...he can't get away with fangirls...I would probably keep Kai's clothes...or KAI himself!!! ahhahahHAHAHAHAHAH!!! I would keep him in my room and hook him up with chains!! Anyway this IS good and this story is so going in my faves list!!

Maruul on June 12, 2005, 2:32:33 PM

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MaruulBWAHAHAHA!! *hugs Max* What are you talking about? This story is awsome! *continues hugging Max*

BluePaint on June 1, 2005, 7:52:44 AM

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BluePaintI'm the one who wrote the story... I was typing it all from memory I had it written down but I didn't feel like running upstairs to get it... I should send in a better story that I wrote...

AnimeQueen on May 21, 2005, 3:09:35 AM

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AnimeQueenwat r u talkin bout u should b proud of wat u'v done its not bad its pretty kool

Artista57 on May 13, 2005, 5:20:24 PM

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Artista57ignore whatBluePaint said. I like this story! Yay oddness!! have a wonderful day!^_~

BluePaint on May 11, 2005, 10:37:09 AM

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BluePaintThis isn't very good...