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Chapter 1 - Cold

i wrote this in school about an someone who i thought was my best friend but ended up stabbing me in the back... she... well, just read it.

Chapter 1 - Cold

Chapter 1 - Cold


Cold

Pale from being bent,

Red from anger wrongly spent,

Crying as my face turns blue,

Suffocating beneath you.

Beneath your shadow I survive,

Struggling to stay alive.

Do I choose to lose or choose to win?

Against the pain that shelters deep within.

Its tearing me apart

Poisoning my heart

Making me bitter.

But you don't understand

Each day I feel life slip through my hands.

Like the teardrops I know fall…

Like my back against the wall…

I know the pain…

The tears I've cried…

If only I feel them deep inside…

I know my soul is shattered.

I know my spirit is black.

But I can not turn back time…

I can not go back…




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Slippingthroughreality on December 8, 2005, 4:40:14 AM

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SlippingthroughrealityVery nice poem, well written with a nice flow. It's funny how inspiration can hit you in the most unlikely places.