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a poem - pure and serene

i wrote this poem after we did some sonnets from shakespear. it might seem a little old school, but in fact i like it and would be glad if some of you would give me SOME IDEAS ABOUT A TITLE
p.s.: thee (in the last line) is old english for you

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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: June 5, 2005 • Updated: June 5, 2005
Word count: 304 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 197

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World_Domination_Confederation on October 10, 2005, 11:10:39 AM

World_Domination_Confederation on (Chapter: 1)
World_Domination_ConfederationWow - This is really good - its not varry easy to find a poem like this, as you say 'old school' on this site - but i really like it!

GothicWiccan on July 25, 2005, 11:16:55 PM

GothicWiccan on (Chapter: 1)
GothicWiccanwow! great poem! i love it! *faves*

nature-buildings on July 9, 2005, 11:30:05 PM

nature-buildings on (Chapter: 1)
nature-buildingsThis is a fantastic poem. I love it.. I will add it to my favourites