Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted December 12, 2004 Updated December 12, 2004 Status Incomplete | You have to read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Can anybody hear my screams? All alone in the dark... I am in so deep... and the light I used to see is now so far away. With nowhere to go and nothing to live for, I shut the door. I lock it tight... so no one hears my fears or sees all my tears. I grab the knife to end this life, it was nothing but torture, misery, and pain. I try to make it look like an accident, or as if I were slain. Emotions running high, I try not to cry. I don't want tears mingled with the blood. I don't know what else to do, or if I should go through with this. But there is no turning back now, no way, no how. But it's too late now, there is no turning back... All my life begins to fall fast, out of my reach, out of my grasp, all the while thinking of the past. Blood begins to pour, but there's no other way. And this was MY suicide.
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gothic_Amy_Rose on July 1, 2005, 10:49:39 AM
Sexy_Bishi_Queen on May 28, 2005, 5:34:05 AM
Amazing, so strong yet so sorrowfull! Amazing, you and this are on me faves!makarino_x_shadow on May 25, 2005, 1:37:42 AM
Its a realy strong! it makes me fell about how menay times iv tryed but failed because some one all ways finds me! +FavsDark_Angel_Wings on May 22, 2005, 2:30:49 AM
^-^ Thankies....bek-ee on April 28, 2005, 1:47:14 PM
bek-ee on
mmmm, brownies! i love this! all the same, i'm glad you are against suicide because it would be horrible if you just mysteriously stopped updating your stories and stopped answering your email etc. gr8 story!Dark_Angel_Wings on April 28, 2005, 12:13:56 PM
thank you! i'm glad you like it...sapphireANGEL_2687 on April 26, 2005, 11:49:10 AM
very nicely done. bravo...oncore...etc. etc. My monkey gives you a brownie...though i wouldnt eat it if i were you..he's not much of a cook...haha..like i said..nice job...i love it..Dark_Angel_Wings on March 28, 2005, 7:14:25 AM
thankies hiei! i won't commit suicide anyways.... i'm totallay against that....hiei-maru on March 7, 2005, 12:58:59 AM
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thats powerful i feel like that alot i just hope you never go thru with suicide becuase that would just make people happy all they people who dispise you or all who you dispise will be happy and we dont want that
+favs+