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Sickness and Sunglasses

Sasha claims he's not sick. Milla disagrees.

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Chapter 1 - Sickness and Sunglasses
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1885 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 248

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Lignite on January 13, 2007, 12:23:20 AM

Lignite on (Chapter: index)
Lignite*has been reading every story has come across* Wow, I wish I could write that smoothly. T.T I'm still learning too. For some reason, I can't create a flow with my stories but -hey!- practice makes perfect! Wait, nobody's perfect.. *ends before going into philosophical talk. and faves story*

phoenixfire1060 on January 15, 2007, 7:34:30 AM

phoenixfire1060 on (Chapter: index)
phoenixfire1060i know! well, digitaldreamer is like 16. im only 13, so my stories suck. heyy, maybe we can work together and figure out how to create a good story!! i wanna create a psychonauts fanfic, because once you get to level 101, there isnt much more to do in the game...anyway...enough with my talking. on with the writing!!

Digitaldreamer on January 15, 2007, 7:35:55 AM

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DigitaldreamerActually, I'm 17 now...I really should update my profile.

And if you guys want some help with writing fics, I'm always glad to help.

phoenixfire1060 on January 1, 2007, 7:03:44 AM

phoenixfire1060 on (Chapter: 1)
phoenixfire1060oh my god, that was so amazing. don't be so humble. you are a great writer. the words flowed so smoothly and everythng blended together. i can't wait for more of your stories. im trying to write too, but it never sounds as poetic as this did. maybe you could give me tips, just as long as you keep writing. i want to hear more.

---Phoenix