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Chapter 5 - Visiting him...

Well yeah just another new story ^^ hope u lie it,,dunno how o describe it

Chapter 5 - Visiting him...

Chapter 5 - Visiting him...
The morning light shone on my face and I began to wake up, startling the unseen Jeff at my feet, He groaned a little, then fell back asleep, I sat up and then leaned against Jeff, and then covered us up. He Put his arm around me and then snuggled up against me, and fell asleep again…
‘Jeff…” I whispered as I tapped him on the torso
“Yeah…he groaned looking at me through tired eyes
“I’m…I’m going to be back” I whispered as I tried to move
“No…Jamie don’t leave me.” He whimpered as a sting in my chest irrupted to the similarity of his and my dead brother, James’ voice
“Jeff…I need to, ill be back, I promise….”I whispered to him as I kissed his forehead
“But…”he whispered
“No buts… Jeff…I promise” I said running out of the door,
“O..Okay…..” he whimpered curling up and falling asleep

I took off jumping farther and farther from where the others were staying, and spotted the sign I was looking for” Takazi Valance…”Where I was raised”

I jumped toward the darkest part of the city, and into the cemetery, the rain fell softly as the rising sun shone only partially into the cemetery, I walked up to one of the newer stones and tears flowed down my face. As I ran my fingers along the name

James Simon Valentine

I looked at the gravestone and broke in tears...knowing...ill never see him again..
“I miss you brother” whispered into his gravestone…”I really miss you”
I leaned against his gravestone and cried, until I seen a dark shadow race behind a gravestone
“Who…who are you!!” I called
“So your visiting that pitiful show of a warrior…aren’t you. Jamie..” The voice called


“….talon….”

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DeathNinja919 on April 9, 2007, 12:46:57 PM

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DeathNinja919I read it aloud to Waku in wolf language, and he said "WRITE MORE! And sister, I'm hungry..." lol