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What hurts the most...

After the loss of her friend Carey and her ex-boyfriend dating her Best friend.Jamie realizes there isnt much left to live for. But will a run in with an old friend change the way she thinks before its to late?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Another day of the same thing
Submitted: July 5, 2007 • Updated: July 5, 2007
Word count: 363 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 200

Chapter 2 - Realizing difficulties-The Truth
Submitted: July 10, 2007 • Updated: July 10, 2007
Word count: 598 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 229

Chapter 3 - "I'm here now"
Submitted: July 10, 2007 • Updated: July 10, 2007
Word count: 663 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 212

Chapter 4 - "First three fingers"
Submitted: July 11, 2007 • Updated: July 11, 2007
Word count: 836 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 210

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DeathNinja919 on July 11, 2007, 6:06:48 AM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 3)
DeathNinja919*calls over* I'm in the other room!! SHEESH!!
Phil: How do I sound like Dame?
You: Eh, no clue.
Phil: Well, one thing for sure, I am WAAAAY taller then her!!
Me: WHY DOES EVERYONE MAKE FUN OF MY SIZEEEEE?!?!?!?!?!

DeathNinja919 on August 24, 2007, 5:36:02 AM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 3)
DeathNinja919The only person who don't make fun of my height, is Rey. Cause I'm almost as tall as him. XD

Klink on July 24, 2007, 3:29:02 PM

Klink on (Chapter: index)
Klink This makes me want to write a story now. :\

KionaKina on July 12, 2007, 4:37:18 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: 4)
KionaKinahow sweet and romantic. Finally a happier chappie, YAY!

Fatal_dreamer on July 12, 2007, 6:08:23 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 4)
Fatal_dreamerThankies^^ things are perking up for me lately...
well cept a certain problem*looks at wrists*
>>

DeathNinja919 on August 24, 2007, 5:38:24 AM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 4)
DeathNinja919I can relate!! *hides wrists behind back* ^_^III

KionaKina on July 12, 2007, 6:09:55 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: 4)
KionaKinaO_O *Hides all sharp objects* There we go ^^

Fatal_dreamer on July 12, 2007, 6:11:10 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: index)
Fatal_dreamerxD
Yeah its an ongoing problem..
>>
<<
Not many no about it but...Meh i dont care....
V-V
I cant really control it much anymore
=(

KionaKina on July 12, 2007, 6:15:38 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
KionaKinaAw no. *Hugs* Try to, it's a bad thing to do

Fatal_dreamer on July 12, 2007, 6:16:34 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: index)
Fatal_dreamerIts okay, i know it is...but>>
SOmetimes it just happens...
Like i have to and....then i do
V-V
Im trying to stop now..i no i have people who care for me now...
<333

Meisaroku on July 12, 2007, 2:23:02 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 4)
MeisarokuAwe totally so cute! <3 I can't wait for more!

DeathNinja919 on July 11, 2007, 3:53:22 PM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 4)
DeathNinja919Awwwww ^_^

Fatal_dreamer on July 11, 2007, 3:55:51 PM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 4)
Fatal_dreamerthankies yew ^^

KionaKina on July 10, 2007, 8:38:44 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: 2)
KionaKinaAwww... *Hugs you* I'm asorry, Jamie.

You know this story kinda makes me think of the song "Concrete Angel."

Here's a YouTube video with that song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQeeNe82_cg

DeathNinja919 on July 11, 2007, 2:41:01 PM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 2)
DeathNinja919Me luvs that song... Stupid child abusers!!

KionaKina on July 12, 2007, 4:38:00 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
KionaKina*Scratches head* I'm sorry, is that what the song is about? Child abuse? ...whoa, now that I think about it that amkes sense. O_O DUDE!

DeathNinja919 on July 16, 2007, 1:56:42 PM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: index)
DeathNinja919Yeaaaah, that's the whole reason why Martina McBride WROTE the song XD

DeathNinja919 on July 11, 2007, 6:03:15 AM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 2)
DeathNinja919Geez, excersizing the black look a lil, Jamie?

KionaKina on July 11, 2007, 1:37:17 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: 3)
KionaKinaaww, how cute. I love how Dameon is there for oyu. I hope you update. I want you to feel better

Meisaroku on July 11, 2007, 1:22:20 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 3)
MeisarokuOhmigosh that was sooo cuuute! AWE!!!! WRITE MORE! I CANT WAIT!!! :DDD

Meisaroku on July 10, 2007, 5:50:13 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 2)
MeisarokuAwww. :[

I hope we go back to being friends!

Very good, loved this chapter! Can't wait to read more!! :D

Fatal_dreamer on July 10, 2007, 5:51:12 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 2)
Fatal_dreamerXDD
We will
I CANT HATE YOU FOREVER
*cries*
XD
More should be in today XD one more chapter is on its way

Meisaroku on July 10, 2007, 5:57:44 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 2)
MeisarokuXDDD

Aw thanks! Woot! Can't wait to read more!! :DDDD You're doing fantastic so far. ^^

Fatal_dreamer on July 10, 2007, 5:59:41 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: index)
Fatal_dreamerXD
Awesomeness
XDDDDD
Thankies you means alot^^

Meisaroku on July 5, 2007, 7:44:57 AM

Meisaroku on (Chapter: 1)
MeisarokuAwwww! :(
That was sad.


I HOPE IT CONTINUES!!!!!! :DDD


The story.. that is..

DeathNinja919 on July 5, 2007, 5:36:43 AM

DeathNinja919 on (Chapter: 1)
DeathNinja919Aww, It's good but sad. I like how you described Sasha. Makes me wanna hug her :D

Fatal_dreamer on July 5, 2007, 5:40:06 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 1)
Fatal_dreamerXD
Really??
Ahah i shall describe you nest..well not acutally describe but u no what i mean.
XD
<333
I L U Dame!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KionaKina on July 5, 2007, 3:02:33 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: 1)
KionaKinaohhhh, Jamie. *Hugs you* I wish I could tell you more than this. But, sadly enough, like you said, I don't understand.

I hope you don't beat yourself up. It's terrible so much bad stuff happened. :'(

Fatal_dreamer on July 5, 2007, 3:04:24 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: 1)
Fatal_dreamerAwws its okay ^^
Im alright now...but im just sybmitting everything into a WWE life..
Pretty much....
D=
Sadly tho...I lost my vampirelord.....
I was his darkling and i am adraid he hates me..
*cries*
Okay..maybe im not okay

KionaKina on July 5, 2007, 3:05:20 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: 1)
KionaKinaDon't say that! How can anyone hate you?

Fatal_dreamer on July 5, 2007, 3:07:13 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: index)
Fatal_dreamerIts cuz he is gay....
But he loved me as more than a friend
...
but hisboyfriend hated me...
and it tore me and him apart..
and then i told Zachie )his name) i love him..
and he told me he love me...and i guess we were friends with benifits..
>.<
But he wont talk to me...and i may have made the biggest mistake of my life...
T-T

KionaKina on July 5, 2007, 3:09:10 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
KionaKinaawww. *Hugs you* It's all gonna work out, you'll see

Fatal_dreamer on July 5, 2007, 3:21:36 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: index)
Fatal_dreamerI really hope it does...
He was like one of the last good things i have left...

KionaKina on July 5, 2007, 3:23:15 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
KionaKinaHmm...well, there's always pie.

Fatal_dreamer on July 5, 2007, 3:24:20 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: index)
Fatal_dreamerXD
Oh yeah...
Pie
!!!!!!!!!!!
<333333

KionaKina on July 5, 2007, 3:26:16 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
KionaKinaYay, did that make you feel better?

Fatal_dreamer on July 5, 2007, 3:26:53 AM

Fatal_dreamer on (Chapter: index)
Fatal_dreamer**nods head slowly**
A little
^^

KionaKina on July 5, 2007, 3:30:34 AM

KionaKina on (Chapter: index)
KionaKina*Puts hand on your shoulder* Good, now take this pie quickly before Bakura comes. *Hands youa pie*