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Chapter 1 - the tale of the unknown guy in inuyasha world

a story i made want to know more then read it

Chapter 1 - the tale of the unknown guy in inuyasha world

Chapter 1 - the tale of the unknown guy in inuyasha world
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I do not own inuyasha group I did this because I am bored * * mean action < > means what they are thinking and this is a made up story ok *UPdate* ok to the unknown guy wanting more money and me not paying him so i will be the unknown guy from now on
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The story starts when inuyasha and kagome looking for fire wood are walking threw the forest when they hear a large boom and go to see what it is

Inuyasha: what the hell was that?

Kagome: I don’t know but I sense a jewel shard a big one too

Inuyasha and kagome go to see what was going on

Unknown guy: give up yet?

Naraku: this can’t be *holding his wounds *

Unknown guy: look your side kicks are knocked out you are badly hurt just give up the jewel and I will spare your life

Naraku: never will I give up the power of the jewel * attacks unknown guy *

Unknown guy: Half demons never learn *dodges the attack and cuts the jewel out of naraku *

Inuyasha and kagome just watch

Unknown guy: too easy *pours magic holy water on the jewel*

The jewel becomes pure once again

Unknown guy: *picks up the jewel* who’s there I know your there I can hear you

Naraku: *gets away when the unknown guy is not looking*

Unknown guy: better run

Inuyasha: who are you?

Unknown guy: why should I tell you half breed?

Inuyasha: *growls *

Kagome: why are you after the jewel shards?

Unknown guy: why do you want to know?

Inuyasha: because if you don’t talk I will chop you up *takes out his sword*

Unknown guy: oh how scary I am shaking in my boots *laughs*

Inuyasha: *attacks the unknown guy*

Unknown guy: *grabs the sword with his hand and punches inuyasha in the head knocking inuyasha out*

Kagome: INUYASHA *runs to inuyasha's side*

Unknown guy: relax he is just knocked out

Kagome: *takes out her bow and arrow and shoots a sacred arrow at the unknown guy*

Unknown guy: *grabs the arrow and breaks it in half * you have to do better then that kagome

Kagome: h-how do you know my name!?

Unknown guy: till we meet again kagome *disappears*

Sango and miroku come running up

Sango: kagome are you ok?

Miroku: who was that?

Kagome: I am fine inuyasha needs help and I don’t know who that was

Sango and Miroku and Kagome take inuyasha back to the hut they were staying in for the night
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That’s the end of the story for now leave comments if you want more *update * this story will be made longer and i left this here because i am lazy
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Naraku: kikyo I need your help *gets killed by the unknown guy*

Kikyo: who are you?

Hax: you can call me Hax bye now Kikyo *disappears*

Mean while back with Kagome and the others

Sango who do you think that was?

Miroku: if he was able to defeat Naraku with easy then we face a more powerful foe

Kagome: hmmmmmmmmm

Shippo: well I think *gets grab by a bird and taking away never to be seen again*

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ok this was really short be I am tired I did this at 3 am and shippo may come back alive if I feel like bring him back this story will not be continue because people only like funny stuff with sex and people dont take what i say nothing but a joke
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Inu_lover1644 on February 19, 2006, 5:27:15 AM

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Inu_lover1644THIS IS PRETTY GOOD BUT PLZZ CONTINUE! I NEED TO FIND OUT WHO THE "UNKNOWN GUY" IS! *favs*

SilverFox13425 on July 25, 2004, 5:56:32 PM

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SilverFox13425alright, hax dies ** kills Hax ** and thats 4 bein a jerk............i need 2 cut down on sugar.....

MusicBitch on July 13, 2004, 2:34:39 AM

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MusicBitchNb post another chapter. Yous till need a lil work (as do i) but i really found this story interesting it acctually kept my interrest ^__^ so keep going! And if you like you could check out my story The Silance of the Lone Wolf and give me some advice ^_^ kk ttyl tell me when you post another chapie!

Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on April 16, 2004, 3:56:32 PM

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Roxy_the_Wolf_demon-stares and pokes it- manwhich

Hax on April 14, 2004, 5:50:26 PM

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Haxi would have but i am lazy and this is my first story on fac

Sorceress_Ultimecia on April 14, 2004, 5:37:22 PM

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Sorceress_Ultimeciait's alright. Be more creative, add more to it.. If you want, add a little humour just to spice it up a bit. Overall: 7.5/10