A Metaphor of Life
Submitted December 11, 2007 Updated December 11, 2007 Status Complete | I wrote this a long time ago so ya here it is I don't really have any experience I haven't read this in a while so I don't really know what to think about it if you have any suggestions for me to rewrite this poem in any other way please do so
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Chapter 1 - A Metaphor of Life
Submitted: December 11, 2007 • Updated: December 11, 2007
Word count: 125 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 244
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BoReDdUdE on December 25, 2007, 4:45:54 AM
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thats very goodHinata102 on December 25, 2007, 6:47:46 AM
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thanxHinata102 on December 11, 2007, 11:19:39 PM
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your first comment!!!!!Kyonkichis1Kitty on December 11, 2007, 9:42:04 AM
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That's realld good, Hinata! ^-^ Did I read this last year?Hinata102 on December 11, 2007, 12:49:18 PM
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ya baka GAH!that sentence sounds weird!I DONT LIKE IT!!! maybe i should delete it...Kyonkichis1Kitty on December 11, 2007, 2:20:05 PM
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wat sentence ur just scared caz i actually complimented you