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A Metaphor of Life

I wrote this a long time ago so ya here it is I don't really have any experience I haven't read this in a while so I don't really know what to think about it if you have any suggestions for me to rewrite this poem in any other way please do so



Chapter 1 - A Metaphor of Life
Submitted: December 11, 2007 • Updated: December 11, 2007
Word count: 125 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 248


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BoReDdUdE on December 25, 2007, 4:45:54 AM

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BoReDdUdEthats very good

Hinata102 on December 25, 2007, 6:47:46 AM

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Hinata102 on December 11, 2007, 11:19:39 PM

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Hinata102your first comment!!!!!

Kyonkichis1Kitty on December 11, 2007, 9:42:04 AM

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Kyonkichis1KittyThat's realld good, Hinata! ^-^ Did I read this last year?

Hinata102 on December 11, 2007, 12:49:18 PM

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Hinata102ya baka GAH!that sentence sounds weird!I DONT LIKE IT!!! maybe i should delete it...

Kyonkichis1Kitty on December 11, 2007, 2:20:05 PM

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Kyonkichis1Kittywat sentence ur just scared caz i actually complimented you