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Chapter 12 - Our Love

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Chapter 12 - Our Love

Chapter 12 - Our Love

Loves memory has traced our outline in this place.
But will the spider remember, or the sun?
Did the water capture our faces in permanence?
Does the wind create us anew as it blows?
Did the shadows from the trees record our passage beneath them?
Our secret been revealed.
Yet I have told no other.
I write these words in silence, in mute testimony
To what once was.
But our image remains alive in this place.
It can not be removed.
You, me,
We then,
Were here.
We saw the day and hoped for tomorrow.
We caught a brief glimpse of love's promise.
We were not liars,
But thieves of time.
For now time has now forgotten us,
Yet our memory lingers, and love remembers
This place that was ours.

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Viddax on May 13, 2010, 6:25:20 AM

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Viddaxsome people don't like poetry if its sad but others understand how people feel peotry is a way of expressing emotions

chexell on July 22, 2008, 5:18:34 AM

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chexellyou write really good peoty with eveness and flow its really good i wish my poetry was more descriptive like yours.

Lionhearts on June 17, 2008, 4:25:42 PM

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LionheartsIts not that good..but please tell me what you think of this one...

Lionhearts on July 16, 2008, 6:25:17 PM

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Lionheartsi guess no one likes my poetry anymore...