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The Duel

A short, but dynamic poem that was partially inspired by the collective impression I received from FF7, FF8 and the motion picture "Gladiator"...



Chapter 1 - The Duel
Submitted: November 14, 2005 • Updated: November 14, 2005
Word count: 154 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 337


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theWriter on January 15, 2006, 11:20:24 PM

theWriter on (Chapter: 1)
theWriterWow, you even have a copyright on it....This is very good (duh). If flows incredibly well throughout the entire poem, and rarely is there a hiccup that cuases the reader to lose touch with the fighter. The stanzas rhyme (ugh, never can spell that word)beautifully, and it just a very well put poem about bloodshed. Not only are you an artist, but a poet, is seems, as well.
Tres bien, monsieur Maestro.