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Chapter 1 - Prologue: Luxan

When the time comes . . .
Will you know the way?

Chapter 1 - Prologue: Luxan

Chapter 1 - Prologue: Luxan
The Final Deception Of Organization Thirteen
 
 Prologue: Luxan
 
 
 Neither in darkness . . .
Nor in Light . . .
But in Twilight . . .
Do we dwell . . .
Thriving in the hopes . . .
That we may become whole . . .
Once more . . . 
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Was it the end, or had it just begun? Had time itself stopped at that final strike of the keyblade, that accursed weapon? And most Importantly, what next? What would happen to the Legacy of Organization XIII? Would it end? Doubtedly. Successors were more likely. But what would they choose to do with their as yet unknown supremacy over all lesser Nobodies? Would they abuse their power, as did the first organization did, and so many others with power and authority?Or would they realize the error in the ways of the first organization, and put an end to all Nobodies, once and for all? That, My friend, is yet to be decided.
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 “Who am I?”
“Nobody.”
“What is my purpose for being?”
“Nothing.”
“Who are you?”
“ . . . Nobody.”
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 It was like a sweet dream, one that Luxan would like to forget.Everything had been perfect before that night, but Luxan would never remember what he was like before. Before what?  Had he been kind and respected? Or a known evil to the likes of everyone who was linked to him. Who am I? He would never know what kind of person lurked beneath the Black Cloak he now wore. My identity?[/i]All he knew was what was laid out in front of him: 12 others, just like him, My friends? My family?[/i]  And the headquarters of the organization. My home?[/i]
  Although he would never know what kind of person he was before becoming a nobody, he knew what he was now. A monster. Over the time that he had mysteriously appeared in Castle Oblivion, Luxan had become a cold and callous person. The ones who had served as surrogate family for him, he had isolated himself as much as possible, then he had to remind himself countless times: “They’re on my side. They’re just like me.”He had never learned to trust them completely, but he had at least learned to accept the fact that they were all he had now.No memories, no possessions, nothing. Just them. And for now, that was just enough to live for.

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Srinidhi on June 23, 2006, 10:15:56 PM

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SrinidhiSounds familiar.Very cold and harsh it seemeth I say.On Luxan that is.And now he has morphed into just that?Story hangs a bit though.Maybe you do need help?Names sound awee bit odd...they hang around asnd don't sound too much like names.Tweak them a bit.Edit this extract...see where you're taking it.I suppose its because this is but the introductory bit.Not bad though.Too much mystery.....what does thwe organisation do?

Oh and by the way thanks for the comment....the other blessed losers don't even pause to look around and do that.Thats what led me to spamming the section....I thought the dates meant the day of posting.So its like some them had the same date as my post AND THEY HAD 31 COMMENTS!That got my blood boiling and I did what I did