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Chapter 1 - A case of . . .Donuts?!

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Chapter 1 - A case of . . .Donuts?!

Chapter 1 - A case of . . .Donuts?!
A case of . . .Donuts?!

Note: Marilyn is a character I created.

A warm and calm day in Springfield.
Marilyn and Lou are on duty.

Marilyn: what a calm day. It's unusual no crime happens.
Lou: Hm, you're right.
Marilyn: Oh, but who cares. So we have more time to chatter.
Lou: Yeah, yeah.
Marilyn: What?
Lou: sorry. What do you want to talk about?
Marilyn: Well, about you and . . .

Wireless message: Attention! A 231404 at Lardlad Donuts!

Lou: Let's roll!
Marilyn: Oh, gee!

At Lardlad Donuts.

Lou gets out of the car.

Lou: O.k., cutie - you'll stay in the car till I'll call you!
Marilyn: (murmur) Yes, sir . . .

Lou (to Eddie): You know what to do?
Eddie: Yes, let's get in there!

After 10 minutes.

Marilyn: I wonder what's going on . . .

Wireless message: Marilyn? Marilyn?
Marilyn: Yes?
Lou: We need you.
Marilyn: O.k., I'm coming in!

Enters Lardlad Donuts. Draws her weapon.

"Marilyn: O.k., everybody - freeze!
Lou: Hey, put your gun away!
Marilyn: But . . .why . . what's going on here? Where's the criminal?
Eddie: What criminal?
Marilyn: They called me and Lou to . . .hey . . .I can't understand what's happening!
Eddie : *giggles*
Lou: Wiggum is out of Donuts! A "231404" means "Wiggum needs Donuts" - WND.
Marilyn: Hmpf. You make me angry, boys.
Lou: I love to.
Marilyn: Oh yeah? Why?
Lou: Because, you're as sweet as a sugar-coated Donut when you're angry.
By the way - you wanted to tell me something in the car?
Marilyn: Yes.
Lou:And what?
Marilyn: You, too.
Lou: What do you mean?
Marilyn: *blushes* I mean . . .you're as sweet as a Donut, too.

Everybody laughs.

End.

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xxxSpongebobxxx on December 30, 2008, 8:12:50 PM

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Typical Wiggum. I see where Ralph gets his intelligence from :)