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Chapter 4 - Gym Battle part II

A story about a boy named Ray who finally gets his first pokemon, So now he will go on a journey to be the best

Chapter 4 - Gym Battle part II

Chapter 4 - Gym Battle part II


Gym Battle: Ray vs. Flint

part II











Now time for you to meet my strongest pokemon Flint said, Go!! Out of the pokeball came a Marowak. Bonemerang!! Flint commanded and marowak flung its bone at nidoran, it jumped over the bone and then ducked as it returned to marowak's hand. Again!! Flint shouted Marowak threw it again but with a greater force nidoran tried to jump over it but the bone hit nidoran's hind leg and it fell to the ground. Now bone club!! then marowak moved in and started hitting nidoran.

You should give up. Flint advised it's not in a fighting condition. We'll never give up. Ray said, Nidoran! poison sting! nidoran struggled to its feet and ran at marowak. Fine have it your way. Flint said, Jump!! marowak ascended into the air. Now crushing bonemerang!!! Marowak was about to slung its bone as hard as possible. Nidoran dodge! Ray commanded. Then an explosion happened. We're back and we've come for revenge! It was team rocket. How dare you! Marowak Redirect!! Flint yelled and marowak turned around and used bonemerang on them! Calm down Butch said as he threw a ball that turned into a cage and caught marowak. Casady saw nidoran on the ground in pain. Well now time for a little payback She said as she threw a bomb at nidoran. Where did these psychos get bombs from!? Jake said. Nidoran run! nidoran got up and started to limp away. the bomb missed but they had more bombs in stock.

Bomb's away! Butch said as he hurled a bomb at nidoran. nidoran barley avoided that one. Double time! They said as they both threw bombs at nidoran. Nidoran run! Ray yelled. But this time nidoran didn't run it just stared with intense eyes. The bombs exploded and a thick cloud of dust appeared. Nidoran! Ray said. Is he all right? Roxy asked. He can't be Jake said. Just then something jumped out of the smoke and landed in front of Ray.

Nidoran? Ray said amazed. it turned around and said "Rino!" Nidoran evolved into nidorino Roxy said. Nidorino! Ray said Awesome! Nidorino take down. Nidorino charged at them as fast as it could toward team rocket. Nidorino's take down attack had a crushing on team rocket causing them to fly in the air. Now Ray commanded Body Slam! Nidorino jumped above Cassidy and Butch and smashed them into the ground. You're gonna get it now shrimp! Cassidy said. As soon as we can move! Butch called out. Turns out Nidorino's body slam temporarily paralyzed them. Good job kid! Flint said. I'll alert the authorities. A while later officer Jenny came. These guys will be locked away for a long time. Officer Jenny said. Is everyone alright. I think that last bomb broke my neck. Jake said. I can't move it! But those bombs never hit you. Roxy said. Shut up! Jake said I think I need to sue them for my pain. Well we'll work the charges out at the station. Jenny said. I just need to take these guys away. Jenny bent over to haul team rocket off and Jake's head turned in the blink of an eye. I thought your neck was broken. Ray said. Well....I uh......dang it. Jake said.

After Cassidy and Butch were gone. Ray and Flint decided to finish their match. Ready? Flint said You bet! Ray called out. Nidorino horn attack! Nidorino charged at Marowak with a great speed. Marowak! Dodge and use Bone Rush! Flint called out. Marowak used a 5 strike bone rush. One after another the bones kept hitting. Nindorino took in the attack. Nidorino! Take Down! Ray called out. Nidorino charged at Marowak. Marowak Bone Marang Now! Flint commanded. Marowak Hurled its bone at Nidorino but it knocked it back at Marowak. When Marowak caught the bone Flint commanded a hard-hitting move. Marowak, False Swipe! Flint yelled. Marowak came at Nidorino and struck right when Nidorino hit it with take down. Now the pokemon just stood there...waiting for the other to make a move...waitng to see who would fall, then... Marowak fell against the floor knocked out by take down. Ray had sucsessfully beat Flint and his pokemon.

Well you did it...Ha Ha! Said Flint, You earned yourself a boulderbadge, here ya' go. Flint handed Ray his badge. All Right! Ray shouted out of excitement. I got a boulder badge! Rino! Rino! Nidorino Said. Well I guess your headed to cerulean city. Flint said, If that's where my next badge is. said Ray. Come on Jake! Let's Go Nidoran! What about me? Roxy angrily said. Your goin' too Roxy? Asked Flint. Yeah, Me and my pokemon aren't going to get any stronger sitting around here. Roxy said. So let's get going! O.K.! Ray said Next stop, Cerulean City!






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Dark_Light on March 9, 2006, 5:36:46 AM

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Dark_LightI love this story! You are really good at writing the battle scenes! Keep up the great work, and thanks for the comment on my story! WRITE MORE!!!!!

silverstream on March 8, 2006, 8:42:01 AM

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silverstreamVery cool!