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Chapter 1 - Alone in this cruel world

Weed finnally discovers that he has brother
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Chapter 1 - Alone in this cruel world

Chapter 1 - Alone in this cruel world
All of a sudden Weed wanted to know if he had any brother's and sisters, then he asked GB ,Gb said"how should I know""why didn't you ask your Mother at the begining before she died" Weed started to cry "Aww.. I'm sorry, but".....all of a sudden they see wild apes swinging so vividy past them. "holy cow"Gb yelled "What the hell was that about" Weed said with his eyes wide looking at Gb "Oh well" lets get our move on, "like you said you wanted to see your brother"Gb looked at Weed. "Yeah your right", "we can't waste time, jus....t sitting here doing nothing"weed looking at Gb.

While Weed was running he saw Mel the Golden Retreiver"Weedo, I mean leader" "where are you headed to" Mel said looking at Weed with puppy dog eyes
"where going to........" "Cool,Can I come"Mel said interupting Weed" "I don't know, your just a puppy ,I mean you'll get hurt a lot" "Stop treating me like a pup, this is the new me, I'm all grown up now and I'm a soldier too, please can I come with you. "I guess, but please don't use too much potty time, it realy wastes time"Weed announced to Mel "ok, I promise". "Hurry lets go" Gb said to all. Then all of a sudden Weed sees kyoshiro and his group of dogs, "let us come too, there might be danger out there, if your alone even with three dogs you can get hurt badly" kyoshiro said to Weed. "oh yeah I've heard of wild apes, they're no good,thats all, but if you get hurt by them they'll take you to their master named Shougun"Kyoshiro said seriously. "Sure, we would need back up if we get seperated, or even worse" Weed said. "thank you so much"kyoshiro said while he glanced.

Meanwhile Shougun told the apes to find him some food, so the monkeys went, they found a silver dog named joe. He was a couple months old younger than Weed, the apes attacked with their fierce fangs "please don't hurt me" Joe sobbed. All of a sudden Joe screamed in tears dieing of pain. Yukimura heard Joe's wail, "What's going on" Yukimura exclaimed angrily. "Br..r..ro..t.h.e..er"That is all Joe had to say before he died. "Joooooooooooooe"!!!!!!!! Yukimura cried out, "get your filty paws off him". "I'm sick of you coming here"Yukimura snareled
He was planning to go against the apes, but then the apes left when he was about to strike. "Dammit"yukimura still crying "I won't rest until I get revenge"Yukimura sobbed angrily. Then he barked loudly that it reached the heavens.

Weed and his group heard the loud bark, it came from far away. Weed wanted to know where it was coming from. Weed started to run, "Weed are you you nuuts"! GB eyed him while grabbing his tail. The sun started to set, "lets find a spot to rest at" mel shivered of the slight breeze, "yeah I guess your right" Weed smiled. They searched off for food, GB caught the birds,kyoshiro and his group caught the squrrils, and weed and mel caught the fish, after they were done catching food, they boriught it back where they were staying at.

Weed started chewing, then all of a sudden oliver's son looking at them eat while he sits on the grass. Mel heard some growls "is your stomache hungry"?
"No, I just ate"kyoshiro said. They hear something by the grass, "who are you" Weed ready to unleash the Zetsu Tenrou Battouga, "wait a minute"Oliver's son said confusing with his tounge on his lips. "are you an enemy spy" kyoshshiro snareled, "No, you silly I'm Oliver's son", "What" Weed exclaimed suprisely. "I've heard about you, your the one that fought against akakabuto, we thought you died" Mel eyed him. His stomache growled, "do ya have anything to eat, I've been starving out there" Olivers son saying with his tounge out. Mel gave him bird,"oh thank you" as he started gobling it. As soon it was Midnight, they saw shadows waiting for their approach.

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PunkGBgirl on November 26, 2008, 8:28:07 AM

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PunkGBgirlNOOOOOOO JOOOOOOOE!
great story!

alitta2 on June 26, 2008, 7:22:38 AM

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alitta2Nice story but it's sad too. Poor Joe!

xXcandydemonXx on June 26, 2008, 5:43:05 AM

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xXcandydemonXxgreat job! :D

nikki001997 on June 25, 2008, 9:28:58 PM

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nikki001997that's a cool story!do more!

MetaKnight56 on June 26, 2008, 12:44:20 AM

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MetaKnight56thanks
:D
i will

halfdemon912 on June 25, 2008, 9:02:27 PM

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halfdemon912hey! this is an awsum story :D
ive never seen this series befor, but that didn't stop me from enjoying it :D poor Joe! RIP

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 9:13:23 PM

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MetaKnight56yeah
i miss him
DX

marisa937 on June 25, 2008, 4:42:27 AM

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marisa937very well done^^
poor jeo:_: i dun't nu him but i dun't care i still feel badT__T..
but it is a awesome fic firend^^

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 5:14:42 AM

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MetaKnight56thanks
:D

AncientMoonLight on June 25, 2008, 3:44:31 AM

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AncientMoonLightAWWWWW that is so said that Joe died T_T but vrey good loov it ^^

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 3:55:39 AM

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MetaKnight56thanks
:D

darkyoshi555 on June 24, 2008, 1:28:10 PM

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darkyoshi555hey, it is awesome so far!

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 2:00:11 AM

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MetaKnight56thanks
:D

Falconlobo on June 25, 2008, 1:17:48 AM

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Falconlobocool

MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 2:00:00 AM

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MetaKnight56thanks
:D

Falconlobo on June 25, 2008, 2:08:10 AM

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Falconlobonp

Falconlobo on June 24, 2008, 3:28:16 PM

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Falconloboi saw this part^^