Chapter 2 - Discovery
Submitted November 14, 2004 Updated November 26, 2004 Status Incomplete | A vampire encountering. |
Chapter 2 - Discovery
Chapter 2 - Discovery
In the middle of the night, I woke up and walked downstairs to get a drink. Comming back up, I checked in on my Mother and my Brother, they were sound asleep. Slowly opening the door, I
stepped back into my bedroom and shut the door behind me. I turned around and there stood the face, now with a body, standing before me. Before I could scream they put their hand over my mouth and spoke to me "Dont scream, I do not intend to harm you in any way". They took my cup, setting it down on my dresser and slowly moved there hand off of my mouth...and kissed me. All of the suddenly the synapse fired and my thoughts of being scared and thinking of being harmed went away, and I completely forgot everything around me.
I looked up at them, their eyes as beautiful as the first time I had seen them. They spoke again "I've come to rid you of your troubles, I know about everything...your father leaving you, your mother an acloholic, everything". You see, my Father had left us when I was 9, my brother 12. My Mother went into depression and decided to take the pain away by drinking. She became a acloholic.
Astonished I said, although not frightened, in a shooken up voice "How do you know of this...?".They refused to tell me. They then put one hand on the back of my head, and I felt a sharp
and painful sting on the side of my neck. The last thing I remember seeing was His beautiful crystal blue eyes. I woke, in a room of darkness...red, black, orange, and blue...the room was full of items of this color. I wondered, frightened and confused, where I was. No one was in the room. My neck sore, stinging, warm. I felt sickened.
I screamed. Why? Because I had nothing else to do. I just screamed...and screamed.
I curled up into a ball in a corner, paranoid, scared. I could feel my body going numb and my
neck stung, still. I could feel my blood thining and boiling. It was horrible...I burst into tears,
putting my head down on my knee's. I cried, and screamed. Nothing else to do but sit there...
helpeless...frightened...in pain. Suddenly I felt something touch my head softy and I heard their
soothing voice, familiar, "The pain may go on for days...or it may go on for 5 minutes...your body
cannot control the transformation there for you have alternations on when the pain may
stop. Most people take but an hour or two, but your a female and I've never bitten one before...
although I think I rather start bitting them more often...their blood is much sweeter and thicker
than that of a male's."
It was him. I despised him now...he's the one whom is putting me through this great pain.
And for what? To "rid me of my pain and troubles". Well, to me, the pain and troubles just remain
and I have nothing to do about it. It's not really that I don't wan't to become a vampire...but, the pain
is dificult for a mere 16 year old, let alone female, to take on. At that second, I felt no more pain...
except for in my mouth. He knelt down infront of me and gently pushed my upper lip up, just a tad.
He spoke to me again, "Congradulations...you've just made your first step into Vampyrism."
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rosecrow13 on August 25, 2007, 3:19:22 PM
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I like it! I really do, but could you stay in whatever tense that you start writing the story in? first chapter was present and this chapter was past, and IÂ have O.C.D. and would like them to match. other than that it totally rocks!vam-girl on February 12, 2005, 1:15:36 PM
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THATS GOOD RIGHT MORE!!