Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted October 25, 2012 Updated October 25, 2012 Status Incomplete | Jaggedsight lives in a forested caln called Rubyclan. Her father left when she was just a kit. Later, she meets him and is attcked by a dog. Will she ever forgive him? Will she find the one who finds the beauty inside of her? Read to find out!
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Jaggedsight sat in her den. She could feel Lightningtail’s eyes piercing her. As she glanced at him, she caught his eye.
“Leave me alone” She growled at him. She could make out his surprised face.
“S-sorry.”
“What’s your problem?”
“Well I guess-….” He trailed off
“Go on with it.”
“Well I was just getting to it.”
“You think I’m ugly.”
“Well. No, it’s actually the exact opposite.” Jaggedsight stared at him, tail lashing back and forth. “Want to go hunting?” he asked her
“Why yes, I would love to go hunting.” Lightningtail smiled he followed her out the fern tunnel. Jaggedsight turned around, almost causing Lightningtail to run into her.
“Why are you following me?” she asked with annoyance.
“You agreed to go hunting with me”
“I said I would go hunting, but I never said with you. I hunt alone.”
“Why?”
“Why would I?” Lightningtail looked struck.
“But I love you.” He murmured to himself
“What?!” Jaggedsight exclaimed. “You said I was ugly!” Lightningtail looked up, surprised. Then he noticed he had said it out loud.
“No you are the opposite of ugly, beautiful.”
“Leave me alone” She growled at him. She could make out his surprised face.
“S-sorry.”
“What’s your problem?”
“Well I guess-….” He trailed off
“Go on with it.”
“Well I was just getting to it.”
“You think I’m ugly.”
“Well. No, it’s actually the exact opposite.” Jaggedsight stared at him, tail lashing back and forth. “Want to go hunting?” he asked her
“Why yes, I would love to go hunting.” Lightningtail smiled he followed her out the fern tunnel. Jaggedsight turned around, almost causing Lightningtail to run into her.
“Why are you following me?” she asked with annoyance.
“You agreed to go hunting with me”
“I said I would go hunting, but I never said with you. I hunt alone.”
“Why?”
“Why would I?” Lightningtail looked struck.
“But I love you.” He murmured to himself
“What?!” Jaggedsight exclaimed. “You said I was ugly!” Lightningtail looked up, surprised. Then he noticed he had said it out loud.
“No you are the opposite of ugly, beautiful.”
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