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Chapter 1 - Half of Sakura' birthday

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Chapter 1 - Half of Sakura' birthday

Chapter 1 - Half of Sakura' birthday
Chapter 1: Half of Sakura's birthday
 
Sakura: WAKE UP SASUKE!
Sasuke: ahhhhh!-falls out of bed- Happy birthday Sakura!
Sakura: Yay you remembered unlike Naruto!
Sasuke: That’s because Naruto is an idiot!
Sakura: hehehehehe your so funny sasuke -sits on the couch-
Sasuke: I got you a present!
Sakura: OMG really!
Sasuke: yup
Sakura: yay! But ill open it later
Sasuke: oh ok!
Naruto:-knocks on Sasuke's bedroom door-
Sasuke: What?!?!
Naruto - walks in- OMG what where you doing in here with sakura? She is my woman!
Sakura: Dream on Naruto!
Sasuke: Yeah she's my girl!
Sakura: OMG!
Sasuke: OMG!
Naruto: OMG!
Neji who was watching the whole time: OMG! - Falls out of the tree he was in- aaaaahhhh!
Sakura: oh my god Neji!
Sasuke: What the heck was he in a tree for!
Naruto: Because I told him to spy on you good thing you didn’t do anything to my woman!
Sakura: I’m not you woman idiot!
Sasuke: Naruto get out of my room!
Naruto: Not unless Sakura comes with me!
Sasuke: No UNLIKE YOU I rembered her birthday u idiot now leave us alone! -Shoves naruto out the window-

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sasusakuAMOR on January 20, 2008, 9:59:23 AM

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sasusakuAMORhahaha naruto got shoved out the window! XD

Zoey101 on January 20, 2008, 9:18:27 AM

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Zoey101omg this is so funny i was laugthing mostly at Naruto lol good job

UltimateNinja on January 20, 2008, 8:29:12 AM

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UltimateNinjafunny

XDarkTinkerbellX on January 20, 2008, 6:23:06 AM

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XDarkTinkerbellXfunny and cute XD

Meesaw on January 20, 2008, 5:25:43 AM

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MeesawHahaha
The four of them shouting "OMG" was the best part in my opinion. It gave a hilarious image.

You should try illustrating this, like a comic. I think that'd be neat ^^

eriepilot44 on January 20, 2008, 4:21:13 AM

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eriepilot44cyute!

i like it :D

SakuraLvr on January 20, 2008, 4:22:52 AM

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SakuraLvrthx^^

eeveelova4 on January 20, 2008, 4:09:25 AM

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eeveelova4lol thats funny u should keep writing

sasuke4kun on January 20, 2008, 4:00:01 AM

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sasuke4kunLOL
i love it so like naruto and sasuke
and sakura of couse but neji hahahah that was great didnt expect to actually listen to naruto and spy on people i love that twist.
cant wait to see whats next.
please inform me when you do write another chapter.
yay you!!!
oo and thanks for all the comments on my pics.

SakuraLvr on January 20, 2008, 4:04:41 AM

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SakuraLvrthx soo much oh and your welcome!

sasuke4kun on January 20, 2008, 4:09:25 AM

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sasuke4kunno problem any time
keep me posted if you want, unless my computer does it for me..

SakuraLvr on January 20, 2008, 4:23:27 AM

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SakuraLvrok!!^^

zerotimberwolf on January 20, 2008, 3:55:38 AM

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zerotimberwolflmao!! Naruto is such an idiot!

SakuraLvr on January 20, 2008, 4:04:22 AM

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SakuraLvrlol i know thx!