A New Begining

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A New Begining

Author
ShadowSeraphim

Submitted
July 5, 2004
Updated
July 5, 2004
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 12k
Words: 2,369
Comments: 1
Views: 441
Faves...: 0
Rating: 0

This is an old story, that i'm having issues trying to finish.

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Category: Fantasy

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: July 5, 2004 • Updated: July 5, 2004
Word count: 2369 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 160

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Drakedragon on September 24, 2005, 4:46:44 AM

Drakedragon on September 24, 2005, 4:46:44 AM (Chapter: 1)

Okay right off the bat, before I even read it, I have something to say. The whole one paragraph thing is really hard on the eyes. Please seperate at least every five or seven sentances into seperapte paragraphs. It makes it a whole lot easier to read and a whole lot easier on the eyes...